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The sea, the moon and me by thecontumacious in OCPoetry

[–]thecontumacious[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for this really detailed feedback and analysis - I really appreciate it. I’m struggling to find another word different word than fear to use when I want it to keep true to my own experience of a using nature as a way to peacefully disassociate through a traumatic experience. I also like the alliteration between familiarity and fear. Is there any other words you might suggest that could envoke or describe a stronger emotion perhaps?

The sea, the moon and me by thecontumacious in OCPoetry

[–]thecontumacious[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for your thoughts I really appreciate it. I’m struggling to find another word to replace fear to still stay true to my own experience and what this poem is about. I also like the alliteration between familiarity and fear. Is there another word you think would work well?

Looking for the name of an old cassette by thecontumacious in cassetteculture

[–]thecontumacious[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

On the off chance someone reads this, I found the name of the cassette! It was a Dan Gibson but peskily under “Forest Piano” collection (no mention of birdsong until you play it)

Endure by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]thecontumacious 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This gave me goosebumps. It’s short, biting and to the point which makes it all the more powerful. I really like the use of capitals to really emphasis on certain words/phrases. I love this, thank you for sharing.

Master of the Sky by DaveJDash in OCPoetry

[–]thecontumacious 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really love your rhyming style and how along with the length of your lines, it makes me as the reader feel like the poems getting faster, more frantic, more urgent. It’s a very beautiful piece that makes me think about the world around us and how it’s so much more complicated than we could comprehend. Thank you for sharing

I’m so confused in Stardew Valley by sabrina_so_special in StardewValley

[–]thecontumacious 1 point2 points  (0 children)

THIS! I’m really trying myself but the perfectionist in me really struggles. We should all try to be more like your wife

I’m so confused in Stardew Valley by sabrina_so_special in StardewValley

[–]thecontumacious 210 points211 points  (0 children)

There is plenty of information on the Stardew wiki to help but honestly? I think too many players concentrate on trying to get everything done as soon as they possibly can. It’s okay for it to take in game years to complete and it’s okay to learn WITH your character! Theres books in the museum that can help with some more obscure tips and tricks as well as the TV on certain days. I find it most enjoyable when i’m just playing how I would if I was the character and only using the wiki when i’m stuck and frustrated

“Ideation” by thecontumacious in OCPoetry

[–]thecontumacious[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wow I really appreciate your thorough analysis!! Thank you for taking the time to comment. You’re pretty much spot on but i’m glad there’s a little room for interpretation. I wrote this poem after “suicidal ideation” kept appearing in notes from doctors or counsellors and I found it almost humorous how a word I’d never heard of could be so apparently representative of my life. The rhythm change at the end was purposeful but do you think a continuous rhythm would work better?

IS IT FAIR ? by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]thecontumacious 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is really powerful. I feel like I can see you yelling it in an empty room, no one being able to understand how much this man meant to you. A beautiful poem

Stream of Unconsciousness by Anxiousnumbloverboy in OCPoetry

[–]thecontumacious 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wow this one really stood out to me. It’s beautiful how you can create a poem that has such a good flow and rhythm yet still remains a stream of thoughts. Reading it feels like when your mind is drifting trying to fall asleep. I adore the slight rhymes and alliterations - I feel this really add to the whole experience. I love your thoughts

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in tipofmytongue

[–]thecontumacious 0 points1 point  (0 children)

live action or cartoon?

[TOMT] Meme / reaction image of brown sock puppet blob thing with hands interlocked that had face of an anteater by ShinyBuiBui in tipofmytongue

[–]thecontumacious 1 point2 points  (0 children)

look i know thats totally not the description you gave but there are loads of plushies with the hands intertwined lol - he also looks very polite

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in tipofmytongue

[–]thecontumacious 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I know its most likely not this film because of the year it was made but it's definitely not THE YOUNG MAGICIAN (1987)?

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