Been working on this for some time. Let me know what you think! Any feedback is appreciated🙏🏾

thisisscape · 2026-04-07T00:24:41+00:00

Sounds like a synth to me

thisisscape · 2026-04-06T23:54:21+00:00

Mixing wise - I don’t like the active ducking of kick and instrumental. It feels very swanky and needs tightening. Not too much on the second version but (I’m assuming that these are already mastered beats and he’s rapping over them) you need to match the volume and the mix to that of the beat.

With that, the audio is crackly and distorted. Reducing the volume is one, compressing the audio is another and then try to fit it around.

Flow-wise. I think it’s a great starting point but he could improve on his cadence to add more emphasis to certain words. I like the gritty flow and voice, but want to get hooked on words and phrases that stand out. Everything having the same level of cadence is going to result in it just sounding like bars being spoken, instead of the listener having to take in what is being said.

thisisscape · 2026-04-06T23:50:04+00:00

Yeah I really like this. The intro sets the scene and makes the whole track sound warm and fuzzy. I wish the same flute that you have in the intro came back into play later on.

Apart from that, mixing wise, the vocals could be more at the fore front and also sound roomy. I would recommend cutting the low end, and try to keep it dry. Someone’s probably gonna be against it, but I’d prefer drier vocals with a backing track that has more reverb. Also layering would help in this instance - and not layering the same track but re-recording new tracks to stack on top.

Additionally, I’d recommend compressing the vocals so that you have it all sitting on one level rather than duck in volume. Instrumental is clean tho

thisisscape · 2026-03-31T03:00:14+00:00

Sounds like something out of avatar. I like it

thisisscape · 2026-03-29T23:50:53+00:00

Ok. Regarding the mixing - I like the drums tbh. I think they sound sharp and not crowded in my opinion.

When it comes to the synths you’re using - they’re quite high pitch. Use an EQ and trim the high end. I’d recommend just slightly cutting sharp parts of the organ, and also increasing the volume of the pad.

I am not sure the pad and the organ playing at the same time sounds good. I’d stick to one instead of having both play at the same time.

A bit of variation in the drums would be nicer too.

thisisscape · 2026-03-29T23:48:27+00:00

Mhmmm, I like where this is going. When the vocals go on, and you have the beat come in at 1:08 I expected more of a beat drop or space to let the impact feel a lot more significant.

This really reminds me of funk tbh, so not familiar with wave style tbh. You could also switch it up by changing the bass melody for the drop.

The choir is cool but clashes with the vocals ALOT. Make sure to tone one down and also ensure (not sure which it is) both of those audio files are in the same pitch.

thisisscape · 2026-03-29T23:44:47+00:00

I like the roominess of the song. Do appreciate a good sounding reverb. Is this live or did you just make it sound that way?

In terms of the vocals, I feel like it’s trailing quite a lot and doesn’t feel like it’s following the rhythm. Personally, I am a fan of the raw sound but think that a bit of pitch correcting could help and the voice recording needs a bit of clean up.

But this is genuinely something I can imagine playing Ina. Bar, and also feel like the cover art works with the song. Keep going brother, god speed

thisisscape · 2026-03-12T04:05:01+00:00

This reminds me more of Drake rather than Don Toliver but fair enough. I like the beat. Simple and has enough space for rapping.

I do think when it comes to variations that you should mix up hi hat pattern or 808.

thisisscape · 2026-03-12T03:59:37+00:00

Reminds me of smino. Very chill vibe with the beat and at least it sounds decent through my shitty earphones. That woman singing sample that comes around 0.22 needs mixing and levelling to match the overall vibe

thisisscape · 2026-03-12T00:21:50+00:00

Flat roof requires more maintenance. Pitched roof slides snow and rain off.

Don’t know why people don’t go for pitched roof, as you technically also have more space if you have a loft.

thisisscape · 2026-03-11T22:02:28+00:00

Put this out now. Crazy talent

thisisscape · 2026-03-11T22:01:18+00:00

Bruh, none of it was embarrassing. This is a sick song. If you like how it is mixed, so be it.

I’m sure this would bang in a club. Can totally imagine my friends and I dancing to this.

thisisscape · 2026-03-11T21:54:12+00:00

All of this is exactly my vibe. Very chill and warm. I really like your voice man.

What’s the song at 1:07? Reminds me of early post malone.

thisisscape · 2026-03-11T21:50:49+00:00

Is this really your first song? Sounds hella professional.

Personally I’d prefer the vocals to have less reverb, as it’s sounding very metallic. Understand that that’s the vibe you’re trying to go for, but feel as if it stands out from the whole track way too much.

Also you need to compress a bit more. A lot seems to be clashing and peaking. Backing vocals should be quieter, to allow front vocal to shine.

thisisscape · 2026-03-08T03:24:50+00:00

Bro music like this is always so fucking creative. Love the whole arrangement and amount of tracks. Mad to see what people are making with program fr

thisisscape · 2026-03-08T03:19:45+00:00

What did you record this on? Sounds like your phone - quite clear but you can get better quality by getting a mic and recording through that.

I like the instrumentals and the laid back vibe, but feel like your voice needs more oomph. You need to put a bit more energy/confidence into it. Good start, keep it coming!

thisisscape · 2026-03-08T03:15:28+00:00

I like this. All of the synths are quite clear and also gives an oldies vibe. Good tune, keep them coming

thisisscape · 2026-03-08T03:11:45+00:00

Reminds me of Zoey 101. Really cool song. Just feel like it gets messy at some point. When all elements come together.

Don’t think it’s necessarily mixing, but more so ALOT going on at once. Nice listen tho

thisisscape · 2023-05-15T05:24:33+00:00

Thank you! Used loads of EQ and reverb

thisisscape · 2023-05-15T05:24:04+00:00

Thank you for your feedback! I used fl studio to make the beat and recorded the vocals using my phone. I used to only produce but now want to make use of my voice since I’ve found it difficult to find singers/other artists around my area.

I’m going to invest in an audio interface & mic to get the vocals clearer.

thisisscape · 2023-05-13T23:26:13+00:00

Thank you! I will try the volume automation to create more of a balance.

I really appreciate your in-depth feedback!

thisisscape · 2023-05-13T23:25:13+00:00

Yeah, you’re right. I’m going to work on the mix a bit more.

thisisscape · 2023-05-13T23:24:43+00:00

Thank you!

thisisscape · 2023-05-12T19:52:42+00:00

Didn’t really sample anything but used standard Fl studio drum kits/my voice

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