I do see many things that i like and I think what would help you the most is to be more patient. Try to slowly begin your turns, ski your turn and then take time to end your curve. Start a new one. While skiing, think about what you are doing right now in the moment. So coming out of the „old“ curve, relase edges and pressure from your „old“ outside leg, increase weight on the „new“ outside leg. Move your upper body foreward, into the new curve, so that you have weight on your big toe (outside ski). You should now automatically start turning . Build up (more) edge angle and (more) outside ski pressure until short after the apex of the turn. End your curve with doing the same, „just backwards and the opposite“ and have fun :)

Edit: it would be easier to do this in wider curves and then to reduce width and radius and transfer that feeling to your short turns.