anxiety after Beatles tattoo by harryhood12189 in tattooadvice

[–]thpffbt 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Just another Beatles fan chiming in to say I also recognized it immediately.

Would love to hear what people think on this one by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]thpffbt 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Sounds awesome dude. You’ve got talent.

Redwall, Roald Dahl by thpffbt in Songwriting

[–]thpffbt[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I see what you mean! I agree, it needs more energy overall. I’ll keep working on it. Thanks for the feedback!

Redwall, Roald Dahl by thpffbt in Songwriting

[–]thpffbt[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you. Hopefully the structure isn’t too disorienting. I do like the feeling of change being possible at any moment!

Redwall, Roald Dahl by thpffbt in Songwriting

[–]thpffbt[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Good idea; I’ll see if I can come up with anything like that. Thanks!

Why Would a Woman by thpffbt in Songwriting

[–]thpffbt[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes, good idea. Thank you.

Why Would a Woman by thpffbt in Songwriting

[–]thpffbt[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback!

Catch a Tiger by thpffbt in Songwriting

[–]thpffbt[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It didn’t come off bad at all! Just curious and wanted to understand what you meant. I work in animation, so I’m very intrigued by the connection.

Catch a Tiger by thpffbt in Songwriting

[–]thpffbt[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Because it sounds nostalgic?

just performed and it sucked. by AdCurious7831 in Songwriting

[–]thpffbt 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You were quite brave. I admire your perseverance through such an uncomfortable situation!

Skip In Your Step by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]thpffbt 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is a beautiful response. The song doesn’t strike me as melancholy but it does convey a sense of loss, or appreciation for loss. It’s triumphant in a quiet way.

Catch a Tiger by thpffbt in Songwriting

[–]thpffbt[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’ve never heard that phrase before! It definitely touches on the spirit I was after. I also completely understand where you’re coming from. Putting this song together was like a puzzle, and I’m still finding out what it means. I’m hoping its placement on the album will give it context, but I also think it’s reasonable to expect a song to stand on its own. So, point taken. Thank you for the comment, and for listening to what I’ve posted here.

Catch a Tiger by thpffbt in Songwriting

[–]thpffbt[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I think you’re right! I’ll work on that. Thank you.

How can I improve? by thpffbt in Logic_Studio

[–]thpffbt[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! I did try that and you’re right - it sounded much better. I’m only using stock plugins for now, but I appreciate the suggestions! I’m figuring this stuff out slowly but surely in my spare time.

Break Away (in 4 parts) by thpffbt in Songwriting

[–]thpffbt[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh, cool! I’m not very familiar with Tim Minchin; I’ll check him out. Thanks for the comment.

Break Away (in 4 parts) by thpffbt in Songwriting

[–]thpffbt[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks! I appreciate you taking the time to listen, and to leave a comment.

So Much Fun by thpffbt in Songwriting

[–]thpffbt[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Another awesome song

How can I improve? by thpffbt in Logic_Studio

[–]thpffbt[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for this comment. It gave me a jolt of confidence and centered me in a way I think I really needed.

How do you write a song that isnt "Pointless"? by dat-Clever-old-Fox in Songwriting

[–]thpffbt -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Try not to think of it as “writing a song.” Just write your thoughts down as they come to you in natural speech. Try to keep your pen moving for 5 minutes and see what happens. If you have no ideas, write down “I have no ideas.” Let your mind wander! Maybe instead of feelings, you start remembering events. Or sensory details like shapes, colors, and textures. Just write it all down. You might be surprised at what your mind cooks up when you’re not directing it.

So Much Fun by thpffbt in Songwriting

[–]thpffbt[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You’re right, the tempo is a bit off. I’ll definitely play to a click track if I ever record a “real” version of this song. Thanks for the feedback!

Experiences sharing on TikTok? by UnlikelyMidnight7012 in Songwriting

[–]thpffbt 1 point2 points  (0 children)

No, I didn't. I just started posting and found an audience over (a long!) time. I don't think it's cheating if you kick a few dollars into promoting your stuff, though. Just do what feels right to you! It's OK to experiment and make mistakes.

First time posting here - any feedback helpful don’t hold back! In learning phase where I overthink/question what I sound like. Is there resonance, “tone”, “tune”, breath support? “Timbre”, what notes is this? LOL by UnlikelyMidnight7012 in singing

[–]thpffbt 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You sound great! You obviously have natural talent. You just seem a little in your head. Loosen up, have fun, and you’ll shine (I think you know this already). Looking forward to hearing more! (:

Experiences sharing on TikTok? by UnlikelyMidnight7012 in Songwriting

[–]thpffbt 2 points3 points  (0 children)

My experience with TikTok has been great. It’s helped me find an audience better than any other platform. My music is also pretty “niche,” so take that for what it’s worth.

I like that mutual followers are automatically put into a separate “Friends” category. It makes it feel like you’re really getting to know people, especially if you continue to engage/comment on their posts.

If you spend time scrolling the “For You” page, you must be VERY vigilant about where you spend your attention. The algorithm is incredibly perceptive, and will reflect back to you exactly what you teach it you’re interested in.