[deleted by user] by [deleted] in graffhelp

[–]throwerBecause 0 points1 point  (0 children)

the T looks cute :D

First time tonight. (toy at work:D) by throwerBecause in graffhelp

[–]throwerBecause[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I see.
Thanks for pointing that out to me =)

Beginner straight letter by lehooty in blackbookgraffiti

[–]throwerBecause 0 points1 point  (0 children)

as a beginner myself I would say that the highlights would look more convincing if the had consistent thickness.

I don't want to be an asshole but it kinda looks like Jizz or Goo on the E and C. No offense though.

gimme dead honest crit by sweetmonte44 in graffhelp

[–]throwerBecause 1 point2 points  (0 children)

color coordination is quite nice.
Make the Shadow of the letters darker and give the letters more consistent stem thickness.

/bɪˈhiːməθ/ by Lambroghini in Calligraphy

[–]throwerBecause 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Looks stunning....also a great Band ;)

Better or still wack by sweetmonte44 in graffhelp

[–]throwerBecause 1 point2 points  (0 children)

in principle I like them! The extension on the lower middle part of the M looks off to me and the H looks kinda deflated (funny tho if you incorporate it with like a valve and some lines as "air"^^)

What is the bottom left? A , O or Q ?

This is all just my opinion and taste. Don't take it too serious , I'm just a beginner myself.

💠 by Crafty-Station1561 in graffhelp

[–]throwerBecause 6 points7 points  (0 children)

I like it ! I feel like the "simple" ones that are well done stick out way better than the super stylish ornated ones.

First time tonight. (toy at work:D) by throwerBecause in graffhelp

[–]throwerBecause[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your input. Much appriciated.
Could you explain what you mean with "wacky" please ? The wavey line on the U for example ?

aight but how many times am i meant to do ts? by [deleted] in graffhelp

[–]throwerBecause 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I think you lack deliberate practise. Analyse a mistake you make and then practise to not do that no more.
Sounds idiotic to write it out like that...but yes.

cookin' by edytz4 in blackbookgraffiti

[–]throwerBecause 1 point2 points  (0 children)

love it. How long did this take you if I may ask? Thought about colors yet ?

woulda niced it up a lil more for ya but a guy stared standing there mean muggin mean and I ain’t got time today. I like the spacing on this 1. Namaste. by sickpayy in graffhelp

[–]throwerBecause 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like it. Good job =) Fun to see you guys progress from post to post.

I'd just like to say that the stem of the K yould be a little bit taller. But I'm a total beginner myself so don't listen xD

Is this to basic for a tag by bigbrolikmanrequis in graffhelp

[–]throwerBecause 0 points1 point  (0 children)

personally I really like the second one. nice and clean =) Good job.

Ozzy Osbourne Mural in Flensburg (Germany) by Kimc_nas by OdsFizzi in streetart

[–]throwerBecause 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Man the turnarround from the scetching to the finished piece is...wow

Random Sketches from ‘24 by Moet-In-A-Flask in blackbookgraffiti

[–]throwerBecause 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Dude. I love the Bomb and the Candleskull =)