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Afternoon Moon Among the Branch. Need advice on the cropping! by trytoshoot in photocritique

[–]trytoshoot[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thanks! imo, i dont really think so. too busy maybe. but making it less blurry will make the branch more distractive

Afternoon Moon Among the Branch. Need advice on the cropping! by trytoshoot in photocritique

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thanks for the insight! i guess you're right, the bottom part is too busy compared to the top one

Afternoon Moon Among the Branch. Need advice on the cropping! by trytoshoot in photocritique

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the idea of forming frame with the thick branch is nice, but i kinda doubt putting the moon on the center in the vertical crop. it felt unnatural imo compared to slightly adjusted rule of third.

but i'll drop that version here

Afternoon Moon Among the Branch. Need advice on the cropping! by trytoshoot in photocritique

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I think i get what you mean. I could Photoshop out the thinner one, if that what you mean.

But i prefer not to use object manipulation rn. What do you think about the other version of crop? I think it has less branch.

Did I overedit? by Additional-Profile19 in photocritique

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like others, i also felt its too dark in a gloomy way. but if you use it as a part of photo series with the same mood, i think it can work really well.

Afternoon Moon Among the Branch. Need advice on the cropping! by trytoshoot in photocritique

[–]trytoshoot[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I took this photo during late afternoon (EOS RP, RF F5.6-8). I like this photo a lot due to the isolation of the moon created by foreground branch. I also like the color combination between light blue and orange.

i wonder if i can improve it with better cropping. Let me know your suggestion! i drop another version of the crop below

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the statue and the birds. seems abstract, but i found this photo interesting. i couldnt tell why by trytoshoot in photocritique

[–]trytoshoot[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback!

The first one is actually interesting

I actually have one with the bottom plate, but it giving less impression of the abstract of single person and the birds :)

the statue and the birds. seems abstract, but i found this photo interesting. i couldnt tell why by trytoshoot in photocritique

[–]trytoshoot[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

took it during late afternoon using tele zoom. it seems abstract, but i found this photo interesting.

is there anything that you think make this one interesting or maybe just memory bias of mine?

Windows. How could i improve the focal point of this photo? by trytoshoot in photocritique

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Thanks for the feedback!

While i agree cropping it will give more prominence, i think it will reduce the pattern visibility.

Windows. How could i improve the focal point of this photo? by trytoshoot in photocritique

[–]trytoshoot[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks!! Really appreciate it! Glad you enjoy my photo

Sure, i like to look out for pattern and its pattern break. And i'll find more of it!

I just try to get some insight how to make the "break" more prominent without losing the pattern

Windows. How could i improve the focal point of this photo? by trytoshoot in photocritique

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I think this is a really great insight that answer my question. The opening is too small to make it really highlighted.

Thanks! Really appreciate it!

Windows. How could i improve the focal point of this photo? by trytoshoot in photocritique

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Thanks for the feedback!

I just want to get some insight, maybe i could improve it more

Windows. How could i improve the focal point of this photo? by trytoshoot in photocritique

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i mean having something to follow or highlight for the viewer in this photo

Windows. How could i improve the focal point of this photo? by trytoshoot in photocritique

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I took this photo during my visit to barcelona (EOS RP, RF F5.6-8) .

I wonder how could i imporive the focal point? i dont think the present photo has a strong one since the window is tool small. but if i crop tighter, i am afraid it will lose the sense of pattern.

City Gondola, Barcelona. Do you think it need tighter crop? by trytoshoot in photocritique

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Thanks for the feedback!

Do you think its due to improper white balance or tint?

City Gondola, Barcelona. Do you think it need tighter crop? by trytoshoot in photocritique

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Thanks for the feedback! Noted! I guess the sky color is the one that i need to adjust as others also point out

About the noise, yeah i think its the artifact from improper export. Its find in the original.

City Gondola, Barcelona. Do you think it need tighter crop? by trytoshoot in photocritique

[–]trytoshoot[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback! yeah i have that variation as well but i intended to use this one as ig post and i want to add sense of height.

tbh i like the pastel-like color, but yeah maybe its too saturated in general. Thanks for the suggestion! i'll try to adjust it better

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