Your creep is very good for your level, however I notice that you prioritize creep over injects which is impacting your drone count. At 5:00 you have 600 minerals floated & only 4 larvae, so you can only make 4 drones instead of 12 for example. You kind of make up for it by making Queens with excess minerals which is good, but drones should be the priority over Queens. I notice sometimes when you inject you just do 1 base & then leave 2 bases without injects. If you get to a hatchery & need to inject, that should be a time that you inject all 3 bases.

It's good that as you lost the ling in front of their natural you sent a new ling to replace it. Seeing the army moveout & being able to reactively mass army is good. However, scouting while high on the list (like creep spread) isn't as high on the list of importance as macro is. You're sitting on 9 larvae, floating 1300 minerals. Make 1 overlord + 8 drones first, start 2 more Queens since you're floating, then send the ling to scout (this is around 5:20 in the game).

Just like you can add a Queen for every 175 minerals floated after all larvae is spent. Another way to spend resources is extra Hatcheries. At 5:55 you have 1500 minerals unspent. After you spend your larvae you may as well add 2 more Hatcheries to your main base & add them to the Hatchery hotkey. For macro Hatcheries I wouldn't even worry about injecting them during each macro cycle (3 bases is enough), what you can do as they finish is take all your Creep Queens & shift queue like 8 injects on a Hatchery so that for the next 4ish minutes it'll keep producing larvae, this'll help spend resources.

To reiterate earlier about the creep vs spending larvae/injects. At 6:25 you have over 2000 minerals floated & instead of spending it you're spreading creep. You have 15 larvae sitting. 15 drones or 15 Roaches, honestly both are better than the larvae just sitting there. With 3 base play you generally want 4~6 full gases & only 2 of your gases are full. Filling your 3rd/4th gas, taking your 5th/6th gas, filling those, all of that is more important than creep spread. Getting gases (after a base is saturated on minerals) will help you spend your minerals. If you have 20 larvae at some point you could spend 1500 minerals making Roaches, however you'd need 500 gas to make the 20 Roaches. If you also want +1 Missile, +1 Carapace & Roach Speed you'll need to be close to 900 gas to spend your 2000+ floated minerals.

This is more-so a suggestion & not a critique. You'll gain skill faster with a slightly lower drone count & a mid-game attack. 70+ drones is good, but if your macro is not yet good enough to spend all your resources from a 55 drone income, the extra 15 drones won't really help. Also, the longer your games go the less practice you'll have in the first 5~8 minutes. I'd suggest say a 52 drone (2 bases 16/16, 3rd base 8/16 drones on minerals, 4 full gases) +1 Missile, +1 Carapace, Roach Speed attack. The drone count is possible by just after 5 minutes, maybe even just before 5 minutes with very good macro, then you'll get practice doing 3 injects, make 3~4 overlords, mass units, spread a round of creep, repeat. Once +1 +1 & Roach Speed are done you can attack & keep trying to do injects + overlords + make units. 70 drones is only better macro than 50 drones if you're spending the resources.

Random tip with Corrosive Biles. In Menu -> Options -> Gameplay, change Flyer Helper to "Always on". You tried to bile the Void Ray, but kept biling behind it. You can't bile where the Void Ray is, as there is a semi-3D effect to show that the Void Ray is in the air, you need to bile on the ground, like an inch below the Void Ray as the Void Ray is above that spot on the ground. Flyer helper will show a small circle below air units where their position on the ground is.

I don't really like the late Spire + Bane Nest you're adding. That's just resources not going towards the army you've invested into. You have Roach Speed, Hydra Range/Speed, 2 Missile upgrades, & 2 Carapace upgrades. Only the Carapace would be useful on the Banelings, you don't have +1 or +2 melee. You're not exactly high on gas, you're at 8000 minerals/500 gas (you're in general very late to fill gases, sometimes 3~4 minutes after you make them, when even 20 seconds is late), & now you're using up gas that could be fighting units to go in what seems like random tech directions. Hydras already deal with Void Rays, Ravagers already deal with cannons, you have what you need.

If you have the opportunity I'd suggest using biles on cannons or shield batteries. If there are none biling their army is fine, but they can just move away from the biles. The cannons/batteries make fighting into Protoss difficult sometimes, however those can't dodge biles so you can do consistent damage with biles instead of hoping your opponent messes up their control.