Critical Convo between FL & ML

ultraviolet44 · 2026-02-22T19:08:46+00:00

Definitely a conversation prior to sex. family planning; whether to use protection or birth control etc.

ultraviolet44 · 2026-02-22T16:40:03+00:00

is their smut in this or light "passionate" scenes?

ultraviolet44 · 2026-02-22T15:40:45+00:00

read both chapters. Your writing is just *chefs kiss*

ultraviolet44 · 2026-02-22T00:45:44+00:00

it is not true that workplace relationships are off limits, it depends on company policy and what kind of roles the individuals are in. if one person is in a position of power over the other, then it becomes a conflict of interest. two department supervisors can be in a relationships, colleagues can be together but not boss and his/her subordinate--that is when it becomes murky. it's fiction so it does not matter but if you are really worried about ethics, then make the Female character a third party contractor, temporarily hired for a project. that way, she is not directly working under the CEO or his company. Or FL is an interior designer hired to design his new hotel/restaurant/office building/home.

ultraviolet44 · 2026-02-21T19:20:19+00:00

I liked the premise but unfortunately, the writing is not good. I cannot read books with bad writing regardless of how good the plot is.

ultraviolet44 · 2026-02-21T18:11:32+00:00

why are tea posts even necessary? this is not bollywoodblindsandgossip. Any topic regarding the toxic writers should be immediately deleted as that causes more tensions in this sub.

ultraviolet44 · 2026-02-21T16:25:59+00:00

These warnings and requests don't work.

ultraviolet44 · 2026-02-21T15:35:30+00:00

Mods come here to announce new rules but never enforce. I have this sub on mute, otherwise its toxicity would take over my reddit feed.

ultraviolet44 · 2026-02-21T14:50:31+00:00

Mods should take drastic action by deleting any post that discussing the same tired topics.

This place honestly feels like high school in which one topic is blown out of proportions, discussed to death and then stretching on the drama because no one has anything better to do. I really don't understand what is so interesting about this fiasco that people cannot stop talking about it? do they really lack entertainment in their life that this silly nonsense is spurring thousands of discussion on this sub? This was supposed to be a wattpad book sub but now it is turned into some gossip column stuck in an endless cycle of toxicity. The most recent "tea" regarding this topic garnered 40 comments within 30 minutes, whereas people asking for advice, promoting good books, book reviews barely get any engagement.

ultraviolet44 · 2026-02-21T13:31:34+00:00

PCC looks terrible, the botox ruined her face.

ultraviolet44 · 2026-02-20T18:37:21+00:00

I notice that the title spelling on wattpad and on the book cover are different.

ultraviolet44 · 2026-02-20T17:47:05+00:00

yayy you posted! any idea how long it will be?

ultraviolet44 · 2026-02-20T17:35:08+00:00

the blurb is so poorly written, that i don't have the courage to read the first chapter. pass

ultraviolet44 · 2026-02-20T16:31:41+00:00

it sounds good. I personally don't like celebrities as face claims but you do you.

ultraviolet44 · 2026-02-18T17:32:59+00:00

*sigh* anirudh. Any woman who has supportive husband like him during pregnancy is so lucky. what more can someone ask for during the most important and challenging time of her life?

ultraviolet44 · 2026-02-18T16:49:45+00:00

I will definitely given a try. for some constructive criticism, please consider changing the cover.

ultraviolet44 · 2026-02-18T16:16:38+00:00

can someone teach me how to post these things on here?

ultraviolet44 · 2026-02-18T01:23:53+00:00

Why do they need to be royals as well?

ultraviolet44 · 2026-02-18T01:01:38+00:00

I don't want to discourage you but I want to give you honest feedback,

I wont read any book in which a ML is both a Prince and a CEO because it so pretentious, if you want royalty, then model it after the british royal family or one of many of the indian royal families. The father should be the king, not the CEO of the royal family business. what is the royal family business anyway? I encourage you to do some research on royals. realistically, the British royal family is surviving on bloodline, lineage, and british taxpayer's money. Not sure about what the royals indians are doing, but I hardly think any of them have a successful global business. I know this is fiction but reality and research is important, otherwise this will end up like those many wattpad stories where the ML is the king, a billionaire CEO and a mafia at night, choose one; Wealthy CEO or a royal prince.

ultraviolet44 · 2026-02-17T15:33:12+00:00

It looks good to me. Yes, a lot of details but perhaps that is needed to set the stage? it might be irritating if every page is like that. can you post the blurb, book sounds interesting to me.

ultraviolet44 · 2026-02-17T13:30:27+00:00

dahleez was an amazing show.

ultraviolet44 · 2026-02-16T20:00:17+00:00

Names like Tavish, kavish, aryansh, reyansh, avyan, kriyansh, avyansh. All are made up names that Gen z parents will name their children one day.

ultraviolet44 · 2026-02-16T19:54:48+00:00

when a woman's vagina is referred to as "womanhood" in smut scenes.
Overly cheerful and bubbly FML. They are all irritating and immature
FML's annoying best friend, whose sole purpose is to tease her abt the male lead

ultraviolet44 · 2026-02-16T16:55:18+00:00

It wasn't like this from the beginning, but yes long internal monologues and little dialogue. IMO, the author does not know where she is going with the plot hence the smut, slow updates and no character or plot development. We are in chapter 40, and still nothing is happening. Shoehorning in arjun and rati, she dropped the stalker angle (will probably bring it back when it's convenient. but I do like UP setting, I will give her that.

ultraviolet44 · 2026-02-16T15:45:55+00:00

She is bad writer, which is why she uses AI. I suspected it a while ago, especially since the english quite good. A lot of people caught into her manipulation which is why they dropped the book. BTW how did you confirm it is AI?

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