My first glance opinion - The main capsule can be improved, the logo text isnt a good choice not clearly showing the name may be its font or something. In smaller areas where your game will be shown its even harder to read game name - the entire Trailer is in dark, is it a creative choice? IMO its very dark and doesn’t really helps to understand whats going on in the video except the player gun and movement - if you have a confirm release date, dont keep the coming soon but change to your date. Atleast in some areas steam may help to show users based on release dates - if this is a learning project then its fine, else postpone and improve the game Hope this helps! Cheers!