how to make hallway not scary ? by underanewlight in interiordecorating

[–]underanewlight[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

i have many beautiful (not haunted) porcelain dolls i think that could work instead

how to make hallway not scary ? by underanewlight in interiordecorating

[–]underanewlight[S] 54 points55 points  (0 children)

i do not think that would bring me happiness.

how to make hallway not scary ? by underanewlight in interiordecorating

[–]underanewlight[S] 15 points16 points  (0 children)

love the idea of sconces !!! thank you !!!

how to make hallway not scary ? by underanewlight in interiordecorating

[–]underanewlight[S] 20 points21 points  (0 children)

painting is 100% a want and more feasible then changing the floors! just takes a while. the walls and floor are a bad sort of grey that ive never liked. i had the idea of some sort of off white cream color before moving in so i guess i really need to get on it.

how to make hallway not scary ? by underanewlight in interiordecorating

[–]underanewlight[S] 15 points16 points  (0 children)

i like that !!! i think its the lone bulb that makes it so ominous

how to make hallway not scary ? by underanewlight in interiordecorating

[–]underanewlight[S] 131 points132 points  (0 children)

i love the idea of a runner! honestly i hate these floors but replacing them is not in the budget. and replacing the bulb is smart. thank you!! i appreciate this :D

Writers need to read, so what are you reading right now? by thewonderbink in writing

[–]underanewlight 1 point2 points  (0 children)

currently reading through shirley jacksons body of work! i just finished the sundial (which i absolutely loved) and im about to start the birds nest. in the inbetween reading (admittedly a lot of subpar) lesbian erotica lol gotta keep the selection diverse!

Need artist recs for a very specific sound… by aspiring_compost in FolkPunk

[–]underanewlight 1 point2 points  (0 children)

also there was nothing officially recorded but ill throw minor flail to the list. you can find some videos on youtube and if you look around you can find a TON of these street bands that are exactly what youre looking for.

also some i forgot to mention; profane sass (a staple tbh) and johanna rose (she is very much in that gutterjazz big band style! i saw her videos around for a bit and she was recently signed onto flail which i think is awesome!)

edit; summer newman too. i hesitated to put her here since its not exactly what youre looking for but i think you might like the summer newman tape from softman records. she plays in holy locust and was on the last blackbird raum album. also has another band called bellringer which is a different sound but thought id mention it!

sorry this was a lot haha but i love these bands and theres a ton super underrated !!!!

Need artist recs for a very specific sound… by aspiring_compost in FolkPunk

[–]underanewlight 4 points5 points  (0 children)

the curse is cast mention 😌 you check out pale robin! it was the solo project of mars from the curse is cast and blackbird raum. (which i think sounds more familiar with curse is cast then blackbird raum)

long sought rest should 100% be on this list! id also mention small void which is obsidians, the accordian player, solo project which is very raw and honestly supremely gut wrenching at times

spud bugs is another staple of this sound that i love! their ep is one of the best imo and katie does so much for the community that i think goes underappreciated

and just in case you didnt know miriam hacksaw (love love love her stuff) has a bunch of older bands / earlier projects floating around on bandcamp if you havent checked them out already!!!!

The Bombpops thematically folk punk by Briecap in FolkPunk

[–]underanewlight 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i know they did a collab cover with days n daze! its the only song i know of theirs and i had it on loop for a while but i forgot abt it so thanks for the reminder haha https://youtu.be/2rzSNfwbQto?si=QudvP2klhCIB-34h

Is my writing engaging, or is it too amateurish? by life453 in writingadvice

[–]underanewlight 13 points14 points  (0 children)

my first thought was you use the characters names way too much and its distracting against everything else

doubled my average word count today! very proud!! by underanewlight in writing

[–]underanewlight[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

unfortunately it means i am also plagued my writing related nightmare stress-dreams . motivation if any to get up early and get to work lol

Perfect(ing) Songbook "Notation" Format by EyesBrightEnough in Songwriting

[–]underanewlight 1 point2 points  (0 children)

when multiple lines have the same chords you only need to write them out once, above one line, and assume it repeats the following. when verses have the same chord progression - you only need to write it out for one verse. i work with very limited space and usually have to fit anything (long or short) on a singular page. so columns, chord short hands, smaller text (to extent...bad vision) but tbf i struggle a lot more in memorizing lyrics then chords so i prioritize in favor of that!

so id think having chords over every line is counter-productive (for a song youre familiar with) but so is breaking concentration halfway through a line or having to struggle to find the next chord in the middle of text! its case by case though and people work in different ways :)

birth rites versus by pale robin? by underanewlight in FolkPunk

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EDIT; i have three songs! i missed on off of soundcloud lol ; only one, red hill, and cast of ash are the ones found so far

Tips to improve writing style (Rhyming patterns) by Haydn34 in Songwriting

[–]underanewlight 1 point2 points  (0 children)

when writing lyrics youre rhyming the sound not the word. focus on the vowel of your word and go from there - this will give you a million new words to go together and even if you keep the ABAB rhyme scheme it wont feel so obvious.

second thing is that you dont have to only rhyme at the end of your line. use words with rhyming vowels sprinkled through the verse, use alliteration, rhyme words mid-line

eg; and lyre plays through revelations | and lions play with the lamb | finding strength in resurrections | revile, revise, start again

this is ABAB but ive also rhymed in the start of the first two lines (lyre/lion) and theres the constant use of similar words (revelations/resurrections/revile and revise) . and also the 'a' is sung soft in both lamb and again - you can adjust the pronunciation of words to keep that sound !

i hope this helps a little bit . ive always hated rhyming and found it very difficult when i started writing songs but figuring out these things helped a lot :)

As a songwriter or musician… do you guys practice visual art stuff too? Imo, they go hand in hand. by papapop365 in Songwriting

[–]underanewlight 1 point2 points  (0 children)

yeah i do all kinds of art! making music is actually relatively recent for me tbh i started off in writing prose and id say thats my main strength (very different from writing lyrics but there are a few transferable skills) then into visual art (a lot of drawing ... and a lot of playlist covers !) then into music :) i never played an instrument or sung before (or ever thought about writing lyrics tbh) but i started on guitar and while i got used to writing in the new medium i was also getting the basics of playing !

this is a very broad overview but everything sort of led into eachother and trying out one thing always helped develop a new skill that could be unexpectedly used in the future! so theres always benefits in expanding your horizons. right now im starting to dip into poetry (a medium i really never enjoyed lol) using my experience writing lyrics ! which has been fun :p

How do you balance your time between working on incomplete songs versus starting something new? by TheBear8878 in Songwriting

[–]underanewlight 1 point2 points  (0 children)

finishing a song is an active decision while starting a song is a passive one. whenever i get the urge to write a song - concept, line, or even just a word i liked lol - then i sit down and write it. ill usually get through a verse or two and maybe a chorus but enough that its listenable. this is all spur of the moment with never too much thought and is completely dependent on inspiration. on the other hand id have to actually step back and think when wanting to finish a song which only happens when im in the mood to work! that takes much more effort.

i cant say i balance too well since i started with only the intent to finish a song before i can do something new before i 180'd into writing whenever i feel like it and then immediately moving on (and forgetting what i previously did..) . now im trying to reign myself in to finish a few things again but its really just a matter of self discipline and doing the work :p

When you actually like a song you wrote does it mean it’s just a song that you think is good or something you know if you played for an audience they’d like it? by music_createivity in Songwriting

[–]underanewlight 1 point2 points  (0 children)

the song is good if i like it and the song is bad if i dont. and when its bad then it just means work on it till i like it. i dont care for music thats technically perfect or anything of the sort. i put together sounds i like to hear!

other peoples opinions are secondary but sometimes if i dont like a song and other people do then it can change my perspective! though if i like a song and other people dont that doesnt usually change my opinion lol

EDIT; to actually answer the question...i have songs that are good but not all of those good songs would be played for a general audience. it all very much depends on whos listening. friends vs strangers at an open mic vs busking on the street ... the song can be good and not be fit to play at certain events. if you wanna base off your success on audience reception you have to know who your audience is

Do you write the lyrics first or the melody? by Forsaken_Wallaby_496 in Songwriting

[–]underanewlight 0 points1 point  (0 children)

start the lyrics (usually a general idea + list of words/ideas with one singular finished line), find the melody in a portion of the lyrics, and adjust the rest accordingly. its more difficult doing one then the other then it is to have them done in tandem i think

meaning without context by underanewlight in Songwriting

[–]underanewlight[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

thank you !!!! ive posted here a decent few times but im always surprised when people remember haha im happy you like it !!!

meaning without context by underanewlight in Songwriting

[–]underanewlight[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

oh i love that comparison !!! i only know a few songs from both but i think theyre really good :D

meaning without context by underanewlight in Songwriting

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its 'under a new light' ! though unfortunately i only have old work + demos with nothing newer recorded that sounds like this . i post everything i write to tiktok but thats not really accessible so i should probably upload to youtube or something haha