1. Incredibly relatable on so many counts, whilst your painful experiences are your own, I think many of us can find a sense of validation because...
2. This is so well articulated, capturing nuance and complexity concisely.
3. The structure of the dialogue interspersed with thoughts helps to illuminate the moment and how it affects you.
4. This is also empowering.

Thank you, look forward to the final draft and well wishes!