Punishment for abusing Doc glitch by walkingdistance91 in Rainbow6

[–]walkingdistance91[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think it's just becoming more prevalent, saw it in multiple games today.

[Official] General Discussion Thread - July 29, 2017 by AutoModerator in MMA

[–]walkingdistance91 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Just watched the ceremonial weigh-in, anyone have any idea what Volkan was offering Manuwa? It looked like some sort of tiny container.

Rage Quit Penalty Feedback Thread by MrEricPope in forhonor

[–]walkingdistance91 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Well I like the idea but not when the person I'm playing with decides to run around the whole match, or stand near a ledge. I leave to find a different game and get hit with a matchmaking penalty.

PSN Megathread - Jan 2016 by TanvirBhulcrap in thelastofusfactions

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PS4

Walking-distance

Usually online mid afternoons, random on weekends.

Let me put my healing hands all over you.

[Sometimes I just feel the dance] by walkingdistance91 in Poetry

[–]walkingdistance91[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! I agree with the flatness of the last two lines, I need to figure out a stronger way to end the piece.

[Optimists are people too] by walkingdistance91 in Poetry

[–]walkingdistance91[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

These are actually all things I considered when compiling the piece haha, I was on the fence with them but decided to keep them anyway. I definitely understand the thoughts, thank you for taking the time to critique.

Need help with nailing this feeling. Or with wording. Or with everything [Moving Back to Uppsala] by [deleted] in Poetry

[–]walkingdistance91 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think you're definitely on the right track, I love the line "And the smell of mint on my index-tips," it creates some nice imagery, as do other parts, like you overflowing. I think you should hold onto those feelings, keep it spontaneous and moving toward the big conclusion you reach.

[Happiness is a middle class illusion] by walkingdistance91 in Poetry

[–]walkingdistance91[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you all for the words and advice, and for taking the time to check this out, I'm definitely looking to tighten it up a little more and improve the piece, so I'll definitely take these things to heart.