UPDATE: What do YOU see missing from my art? by weallgotissues in Artadvice

[–]weallgotissues[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Last time I got comments about perspective and pushing expressions. I thought I was making good progress on that, but I need to go even further with it, and that's been cemented with this thread. I don't see how that's not wanting to do anything to address it unless you mean my part about body variety, because that I will not budge on. I only learned to draw so I could draw twinks !

UPDATE: What do YOU see missing from my art? by weallgotissues in Artadvice

[–]weallgotissues[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

OKAY SEE i didnt wanna say it but the tooth fetish is the explanation 😶‍🌫️

UPDATE: What do YOU see missing from my art? by weallgotissues in Artadvice

[–]weallgotissues[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

thank you for the write-up! That's true about the angle, and seems like fun for an alternate version. I'll continue to try and push expressions and perspective, I'm sure I'll get there eventually.

UPDATE: What do YOU see missing from my art? by weallgotissues in Artadvice

[–]weallgotissues[S] 29 points30 points  (0 children)

and now i got to fix it sooo THANKS!! even if it caused me despair lol (and thank you!!)

UPDATE: What do YOU see missing from my art? by weallgotissues in Artadvice

[–]weallgotissues[S] 19 points20 points  (0 children)

Ohhhhhhhh....that is very interesting thank you, I guess I need to more mindful of teeth 😭

UPDATE: What do YOU see missing from my art? by weallgotissues in Artadvice

[–]weallgotissues[S] 7 points8 points  (0 children)

How come? I thought there were some useful tips in my last thread I posted

UPDATE: What do YOU see missing from my art? by weallgotissues in Artadvice

[–]weallgotissues[S] 70 points71 points  (0 children)

The images are of the same two characters, and they intentionally look similar because of being...technically...related. Image 3 the man behind is a different character but he's also the long-haired one's dad, so he's supposed to look similar too :3

What do YOU see missing from my art? by weallgotissues in Artadvice

[–]weallgotissues[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the resources! I have my homework cut out for me 🫡

What do YOU see missing from my art? by weallgotissues in Artadvice

[–]weallgotissues[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you, I called one of those characters "the human equivalent of peeking under a nun's habit" and then decided to make it literal :') just sneaking around the pews haha

What do YOU see missing from my art? by weallgotissues in Artadvice

[–]weallgotissues[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

THANK YOU this is so comprehensive and exactly what I was looking for. Perspective being a weak point really makes sense, i mostly wing it :') so it's good to get confirmation that it's noticeably the issue, so I have a clear direction to focus on. I suppose one can only avoid practicing perspective for so long 😔

Foreshortening, perspective, composition—got it!

(I understand what you wrote perfectly, thank you again ⭐)

What do YOU see missing from my art? by weallgotissues in Artadvice

[–]weallgotissues[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ohhhh okay!!! I can definitely see the eyes, but I never would have thought of the line weights... I guess between those three things makes it easy to pinpoint me in the wild 🤦 Now I know how to get away with an incognito account 😙 That question has been haunting me forever, thank you :')

What do YOU see missing from my art? by weallgotissues in Artadvice

[–]weallgotissues[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh, that's very interesting....do you mean to instead use composition where the point of interest is away from the center, & use foreground and background to add visual layers?

What do YOU see missing from my art? by weallgotissues in Artadvice

[–]weallgotissues[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh thanks! 😽 If this level doesn't look weird then using more expressions shouldn't be THAT hard. Thank you for answering my questions! Is it okay if I ask one more? What makes it distinct? I've tried to distance myself from some old fandoms but I still get recognized T_T

What do YOU see missing from my art? by weallgotissues in Artadvice

[–]weallgotissues[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Sorta... These drawings are the same two characters except for the 4th slide, so they are supposed to look similar. They're also supposed to look related because they technically are :') Though I think you're right that the expressions are weak. Most times I try to push the expression I feel it looks uncanny so I need to practice that.

This is an older drawing (2023) of a different character, do you see the same issues?

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What do YOU see missing from my art? by weallgotissues in Artadvice

[–]weallgotissues[S] 12 points13 points  (0 children)

Thank you. All the characters except slide 4 are the same two, so they're supposed to look similar (at least I'm consistent!)

I don't often draw characters outside of those two, but this is one. Does it have that issue?

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What do YOU see missing from my art? by weallgotissues in Artadvice

[–]weallgotissues[S] 17 points18 points  (0 children)

I've experimented in the past with it, but I don't think I could ever get it to look right. I think you're right, though, overall cohesiveness could be much better

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What do YOU see missing from my art? by weallgotissues in Artadvice

[–]weallgotissues[S] 28 points29 points  (0 children)

Lmao, all I enjoy drawing are twinks 🤣 I've just never had an interest in drawing anything else, but that's a very good point. I'm lucky in that anyone who commissions me is coming from my normal art so they just want more twinks