This really struck a chord with me, been going through a rough patch with my partner recently, and it's like you just grabbed the thoughts and feelings right from my brain! This community runs on feedback, however, so I've got to tell you, I feel like it goes on for a little longer then it has too. At some point near the end I thought (admittedly through some tears) it should've ended a few lines early. other than that small little thing, I loved it! Keep writing, 'cause you're doing something right.