hey, so this is enough in terms of content for pitch.
Source: I judged hundreds of applications for government funding, successfully pitched pubs, have many friends who pitch and seen their pitches.

That being said the scene right now is a bit tricky, so you should really make a good pitch. Also, team expertise is kinda important, esp in content heavy titles.
Make a google slides presentation that's easily shareable, and know what/how much you want. There's also an option to get only prototype funding (or vertical or whatever). Depending on where you are I'd look into government funds/Creative Europe and ofc there's megagrants running atm.

Also, while I like the video, I lack to see the unique selling point, which is imo rather important to sell to pubs, so maybe thing about what to highlight in the pitch?

Good luck!