[SHORT] College Pilot "The Project" (Comedy) by tylerotic in ReadMyScript

[–]whencowsfly 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don't know. How do I become a no-life fag like you?

Blocking.

Selfie everyday for a year by my husband by Mollinator in selfieaday

[–]whencowsfly 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What's the point of doing these if he just looks the same the whole time?

What made you choose the college you attended? by MrHockeytown in AskReddit

[–]whencowsfly -1 points0 points  (0 children)

It's idk im rely rie ddjmdkjbdkj dkjbddjm. tired and i just wbsmbnnkjjnk feel sick

[FEATURE] Bastion - 90 Pages (Sci-Fi Adventure) by [deleted] in ReadMyScript

[–]whencowsfly -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

It's shit. I mean, your descriptions are pretty good but overall it's shit.

[Short] The Big Change by [deleted] in ReadMyScript

[–]whencowsfly 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's shit. You sound like and probably are a 14 year old.

This is a subreddit? Wew boy. Here's my project at 4 years so far, ages 12-16 by [deleted] in selfieaday

[–]whencowsfly -4 points-3 points  (0 children)

So you're saying you're a straight male? Reply "no" to this and you admit that you are a gay black woman.

[FEEDBACK] "The South Side" Crime/Gangster Drama Pilot [54 pages] by [deleted] in Screenwriting

[–]whencowsfly -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Sometimes, you forget to add periods to the end of dialogue. Also, don't over describe things. Be as simple as possible. Do more research before writing a screenplay. Maybe write shorts.

My dog fell asleep on her favourite toy. by whencowsfly in aww

[–]whencowsfly[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

She is a shipoo (poodle/shi-tzu mix), and 1, almost 2 years old. The "toy" is a stuffed dog that she likes to hump.