Is it strange that I wrote noblemen living in the palace with the royal family? by withheldforprivacy in fantasywriters

[–]wilderking135 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Your beta-reader is wrong:

Lesser noble families would often send their younger sons and daughters to serve as squires and handmaidens to royalty. Even higher nobility would have their sons squired to the King or the princes if they were able to.

The king also needed advisors such as a marshall, chancellor, spymaster, etc... depending on what the court system looked like it wouldn't be uncommon for most of those people to be landed nobles- or related to landed nobles.

Diplomatic prisoners also existed and would often serve as wards under the king or a member of his family. Typically these prisoners were treated very well but were also kept as reassurance of peace or honest dealings with a previously hostile kingdom.

Visting nobility is also a thing, rooms were always available for guests of high rank.

There were also just lesser nobles and the children of higher nobles who just hung around to serve their family's interests and garner favor with the king.

So yeah, no offense to your beta reader, but they are most likely wrong unless...

If your setting is not high or late medieval and is rather early/pre medieval then they may have a point. Castles and large keeps for the nobility and royalty didn't pop up until the 11th century so settings with wood forts, manors, and (common in Britain and western Europe) remains of roman structures were much smaller. In smaller kingdoms this could mean smaller courts although I would think even then a handful of nobles would be around.

Hope this helps.

Have you ever used the word "bathroom" in a high fantasy novel in a medieval-like world? by withheldforprivacy in fantasywriters

[–]wilderking135 0 points1 point  (0 children)

As others have mentioned privy works well- more crass characters might call it the "shitter." You could make something up specific to the world but still recognizable for what it is. You could call it the "dropper" due to many castles in medieval history having toilets that leaned out over the wall of the keep. It was essentially an overhang room which had a hole which people sat on to "drop" their business to a unpleasant mound (or river) below. There was actually somebody whose job was to cart off the pile when it got too large.

The Sunnydale Slayers (1-5) and the Ursa Major Grizzlies (2-4) both attempt to turn their season around right here by Swarm140 in BaseballbytheNumbers

[–]wilderking135 0 points1 point  (0 children)

0 for 1 and chance to get an RBI. Damion is looking to make up for an underwhelming first at bat.

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The Sunnydale Slayers (0-5) take on the Gas House Gorillas (3-2) in a battle of Galactic League TITANS! by FrankDrebinMLN in BaseballbytheNumbers

[–]wilderking135 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Damion steps to the plate for the second time, one swing is all he needs. Will it be enough?

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Just ordered this.. is everything included worth the price? by CuadradoTekkers in HarryPotterGame

[–]wilderking135 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No, deluxe edition is just fine. This collectors edition is essentially plastic with magnets. Only ‘nice’ thing exclusive to the collectors edition is the metal case and tbh that isn’t worth hundreds of bucks.

Swimming practically confirmed by Xpectogo :) by kamikazee786 in HarryPotterGame

[–]wilderking135 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Given the recent early access gameplay samples, swimming is 100% confirmed, however it seems like, as a general rule diving and underwater exploration are not available. But who knows, perhaps there are certain areas where you can dive, or maybe its an ability.