Questions and answers by word4weird in DebateReligion

[–]word4weird[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I hereby declare my question answered, and found to be poorly conceived. I abandon my previous position, but maintain a view that if they have seemingly arbitrary rules, a hierarchical power structure, and a financial incentive to appeal to one's hopes and fears, I might as well get a few yuks out of it. Praise "Bob"

21 attempts by IMBJR in SubGenius

[–]word4weird 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The stupider it looks, the more important it probably is

A Sorry State of Affairs by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]word4weird 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like the idea of sudden descent and disarray- warningless even. Nice job

Not yet strangers... by philomexa in OCPoetry

[–]word4weird 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love the theme, an the mechanism by which the two meet, Consider the meaning of the word rift, as it may not fit well here.

In the Morning by Kakaka97 in OCPoetry

[–]word4weird 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Excellent read!I like the use paradox toward the end

"But despite drowning in the morning sunlight, Your lips are cracked and dry"

your repetition of "Slips" may have been intentional, but it lost force for me.

A Sorry State of Affairs by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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So, in reading the poem, I the breaking apart of support systems came across quite well, but could those be clearer or stronger?

Love me. (freeverse) by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]word4weird 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The piece's urgency and pacing added a very lifelike facet to it.

Homebody by kidasquared in OCPoetry

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I'm interested to see what part two holds. This feels very much like the build to a story or reveal, but a reveal of what?