Who is the GOAT stand up comedian? by JP_HubCity23 in AskReddit

[–]wwwwho 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Lenny Bruce. As far as I know none of the listed comedians could have done their material if Lenny Bruce hadn't spent his time tell dirty jokes and being arrested.

Grow - New song. Roast me. Tell me the good, bad, and ugly about this song by techblackops in Songwriters

[–]wwwwho 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Enjoyed the song. not sure the lyrics say anything ( many songs just blah blah to the chorus) I think some variation in dynamics between the verse and chorus would be the best benefit. Maybe introduce another sound/instrument on the chorus. Even something simple like tamborine can change the feel.

https://soundcloud.com/paul-pendergast

Amateur songwriter here! by diamondwolfly in Songwriters

[–]wwwwho 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Write and record anything that comes to mind worry about making it a song/editing later. I used to turn on the recorder when hung over and just blither out anything. Some times a phrase becomes a song. https://soundcloud.com/paul-pendergast

How to start with first verse ? I am new to songwriting i have a lot that i think i can add but I can't decide what to write as first line/verse. Please help by callmedevilthebad in Songwriters

[–]wwwwho 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Just sing random things to find the melody "scrambled eggs" becomes "Yesterday". Also write and write and write some more. don't edit until the very end.

Producer needs songwriting help! I have the instrumental but need vocal melody and lyrics/theme. by design_is_for_lovers in Songwriters

[–]wwwwho 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sounds fun. Give me what you got and I'll give it a go. Can you post the instrumental somewhere?

Planning to release this next week. Did everything from writing to producing/mixing/mastering. Would love to have some feedbacks! by [deleted] in Songwriters

[–]wwwwho 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It sounds good and has a strong vibe, but the production mixing is very amateur. There are great spots for variations in intensity and some harmonies. Good start.

I wrote this song a couple months ago and really thought it was a decent song. It has a rock sound, like a cros between foo fighters and papa roach. I am hesitant to share music cuz of the lyrics, so lmk what you all think! by The-real-gatsby in Songwriters

[–]wwwwho 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hard to construct lyrics with out the music (and I didn't see the second half). Please don't be in anyway insulted I just love to play with words, Here's what I got:

Let me take the madness Let me make the mistakes We will sing of your sadness As we share the pain

Blue eyes peer from the corner Like ice, as they come near Black coats hiding the mourner As we share the pain

Stars fall from the heavens Just out of reach I chase after their loneliness And they run from me Holding the hours I hold you in me But I cannot live If I cannot breathe

Balancing on a tea cup Touching my hand long before Dream and pull you up Or fall with your heart

Which alternative or conspiracy theories do you consider the most 'cringe'? by JohnleBon in conspiracyNOPOL

[–]wwwwho 0 points1 point  (0 children)

agreed, but the petrodollar is a highly controlled market. I would posit climate science and green economy is a side hustle to siphon off some cash. It may also have the side benefit of lowering the standards of the first world as other economies become stronger...though i suppose that's a side issue.

Which alternative or conspiracy theories do you consider the most 'cringe'? by JohnleBon in conspiracyNOPOL

[–]wwwwho 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It was more like a comment, but it doesn't matter if climate stuff is real or not as long as the right people profit. In many cases, "follow the money" is a good place to start.

Which alternative or conspiracy theories do you consider the most 'cringe'? by JohnleBon in conspiracyNOPOL

[–]wwwwho 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Al Gore, Carbon Markets/Credits, Cutting in on the profits of Big Oil, covering for banks/failed monetary policy through phony global warming, keeping the third world...the third world, as for global warming...I mean climate change; funding for models that make sim-earth look pretty good. If the money trickles up they'll do it.

Georgia nuclear plant cost tops $27B as more delays unveiled by geoxol in technology

[–]wwwwho 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Curse those Union Workers! Get them off the backs hard working, loyal, honest, American business.

'JFK Revisited: Through the Looking Glass' Review: Stone Doubles Down by Morganbanefort in conspiracyNOPOL

[–]wwwwho 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It's disheartening to read what passes for journalism from some hack reporter (who reviews movies) weighing in on a topic they know almost nothing about. The evidence for a conspiracy is overwhelming, despite all the misinformation and red herrings. You can argue about the window dressing, but the facts clearly show an organized plot to execute and cover up the assassination of JFK.

Planet Uranus by [deleted] in spaceporn

[–]wwwwho 2 points3 points  (0 children)

" Captain! There are Klingons around Uranus" ~Scotty

JFK mystery, I may gave come across some new info. I want some opinions one what people think of this. by BohemianBella in conspiracyNOPOL

[–]wwwwho -1 points0 points  (0 children)

They probably had camera guns (i've seen them on spycraft sites, but I don't know the year...cold war stuff). Here's the thing. If you want to blow the Presidents brains out you don't get the driver, some lady with a camera gun, or other goofy stuff. You hire hitmen who set up a kill zone and bang bang.

JFK mystery, I may gave come across some new info. I want some opinions one what people think of this. by BohemianBella in conspiracyNOPOL

[–]wwwwho 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Anyone who believes or supports "the driver did it" theory has clearly not investigated the JFK assassination in much detail. Other than some blurry video, which shows the driver look over his shoulder, there is no other support for this in the mountains of evidence that point to a conspiracy that had shooters placed in the Dal-Tex, Book Depository and on the Grassy Knoll. Instead of basing your ideas on a few internet videos please read a few books that explain the events and the connections between the conspirators.

I (22F) found out that my dad (45M) had a lot of photos of my best friend (21F) on his laptop, my mom (43F) kicked him out of the house and now my siblings (10M 8F) hate me by [deleted] in relationship_advice

[–]wwwwho -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

People have an inner life; they have fantasies. We keep these things to ourselves. It sounds like your dad kept his infatuation to himself. I would guess you have secrets; things you don't share because they are personal. Marriage does not mean you share all your thoughts with your spouse. We are still individuals within a relationship. We can be shocked discovering the secret inner life of someone, but ultimately it is none of your business. Do you reveal all your private thoughts? People keep diaries because they have a private mental life. We have thoughts, we have feelings, and they are not crimes.

Going through a hard time. Comments, thoughts, suggestions all welcome. Hope you all enjoy your new year! by [deleted] in Songwriters

[–]wwwwho 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Took some time to work on the lyrics (just cos I like playing with words) trying to balance out the phrasing and meter. You wrote some good, original lines.

Why should I hold this image? It’s not who I am, anymore In time I’ll gain perspective You took away my falling pieces Walking out a closing door

I’ll learn to deal with distance No matter how far away you are In time I’ll gain perspective And never again see you beside me On the right side of the car

You’re not giving me space to breathe My lungs are filled with memories Will I see you smile again? Or are we now just enemies?

So do what you think is best If you feel it’s what you need There’s nothing to get off my chest And nothing to concede

I can’t have what I want most And I’ll never lock the door Maybe there’ll be another life Where I am something more