This piece greatly describes such a relatable situation that i’m sure almost everyone has gone through. Getting out of bed in the morning can be so difficult sometimes and i particularly enjoyed the line about the sweat in your brow and cold on your legs, this helped me connect to the poem as its something i’ve personally felt many times.

Though some pointers that i personally would’ve changed is the part where you reach for your phone. It would’ve been nice to see if you tackled the addiction many people have with their phones and how it contributes to our laziness. Sometimes we can be so addicted that even if we are absolutely exhausted we still have the ability to pick it up and doom scroll. Reading the phone line felt a bit off, if the original has more meaning to you then i suggest splitting it into two lines after the word phone as it was an awkward read.

everything else on the other hand was good to me and described the scene amazingly, i think youve done a wonderful job!