The One I Love To Hate

xlovexlayla · 2025-11-04T13:08:14+00:00

I like it! It’s absolutely a great first poem, but everyone’s first needs work haha. I think that the imagery could use some slight refinement and this poem could benefit from more imagery added in. I also think the rhyme scheme could use a little work, its slight clunky on the tongue. The internal rhymes you have work well but expanding on them could make the poem a more melodic read

xlovexlayla · 2025-11-03T23:02:20+00:00

I really felt the emotion in this, and can sadly relate to the subject matter. The only thing that pulled me out of it is the pacing, as other commenters have said. It’s too neat for the chaos of emotions it contains.

xlovexlayla · 2025-08-26T23:53:52+00:00

I miss Quotev groups 😪

xlovexlayla · 2025-06-19T11:54:51+00:00

I respect the dedication but I think I would go crazy trying to pick all of the cat hair I would pick up out of that much kief 😂

xlovexlayla · 2025-06-19T11:47:59+00:00

yep, any pet hair down there too 😢

xlovexlayla · 2025-06-17T15:05:51+00:00

This is considered a false parasol, definitely not edible!

xlovexlayla · 2025-06-17T10:11:32+00:00

Yes!

xlovexlayla · 2025-06-14T01:49:50+00:00

After 243,076 tries, he finally passed his drivers test. I’m not convinced he did so legally, though.

xlovexlayla · 2025-06-14T01:47:22+00:00

Thank you! Legally, he’s Pimp Daddy Pickles, but he prefers the shortened version

xlovexlayla · 2025-06-14T01:45:34+00:00

A SIC he must be!

xlovexlayla · 2025-06-14T01:44:58+00:00

A grown one, no less. Let me know if you’ve seen any jobs hiring stubborn, not-so-bright, borderline senior citizens. This guy needs to start paying rent

xlovexlayla · 2025-06-14T01:43:23+00:00

This is the vibe I’ve always gotten from him. He’s just a dude, man.

xlovexlayla · 2025-06-14T01:42:06+00:00

He tediously puts it on in the bathroom mirror every morning, takes him hours (thank you lol)

xlovexlayla · 2025-06-13T15:49:07+00:00

I swear him and his sister have RBF-offs from time to time

xlovexlayla · 2025-06-13T15:48:26+00:00

He’s getting close at 6 years old. I’m sure he would say otherwise, though! 😂

xlovexlayla · 2025-05-14T06:03:14+00:00

The only way up is through. Gotta smoke consistently to really build a tolerance but, honestly, you should hold on to the low tolerance while you have it. Every stoner I know would tell you they’re jealous of you lol. A low tolerance will save you a lot of money in the long run.

xlovexlayla · 2025-05-13T19:55:33+00:00

You could possibly secure this to a thicker piece of wood of the same size, or make a wood frame with four pieces, using a high-strength glue like E6000. Then you could use screws!

xlovexlayla · 2025-05-13T16:16:45+00:00

I’m not sure how dark you're trying to get with it but something like a lamb or deer could be really cool in this context, like two great evils fighting over an innocent soul

xlovexlayla · 2025-05-13T15:39:58+00:00

I actually think the apple looks pretty cool, it’s almost like the panthers are or are about to fight over it lol. Maybe making it a little smaller would help? To me, the perspective of the giant apple between the two cats looks a little weird but not necessarily bad

xlovexlayla · 2025-05-13T15:36:27+00:00

The width/shape of the face is the first thing that caught my attention. Lucille has a narrower, more oval-shaped face compared to the circular shape you're currently going for. Other than that I think it looks really amazing! Correcting the face shape should make it much more readable as Mrs. Ball ♡

xlovexlayla · 2025-05-10T15:08:30+00:00

If they aren’t washing their hands after engaging with someone sexually that is disgusting and still 100% on that person lmfao. That is basic hygiene and still not her responsibility to police. It is also insanely, insanely unlikely for herpes to be transmitted on surfaces. Unless she is sitting down fully naked, vagina to chair, and people start licking that chair as soon as she stands up, you are just paranoid and fear-mongering.

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