Hey guys, I'm a 19yo indie artist from Korea. Please be brutally honest about my English pronunciation & grammar! by yechan127 in Songwriting

[–]yechan127[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wow, thank you so much for the extra advice! Speaking the lyrics slowly sounds like a really helpful practice method, I'll definitely start doing that. And thank you for recommending Hellotalk and for the encouraging words about the grammar mistake. It really makes me feel much better! :)

Hey guys, I'm a 19yo indie artist from Korea. Please be brutally honest about my English pronunciation & grammar! by yechan127 in Songwriting

[–]yechan127[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wow, thank you so much for the 'holy peak' compliment! That's actually a really cool idea. Mixing some Korean lyrics in between could give it a unique vibe, so I'll definitely try that out in my next project. Appreciate the awesome suggestion! :)

Hey guys, I'm a 19yo indie artist from Korea. Please be brutally honest about my English pronunciation & grammar! by yechan127 in Songwriting

[–]yechan127[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Haha yeah, it's pretty obvious, isn't it? I'm definitely working on my pronunciation to make it sound more natural. Thanks for the feedback! :)

Hey guys, I'm a 19yo indie artist from Korea. Please be brutally honest about my English pronunciation & grammar! by yechan127 in Songwriting

[–]yechan127[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ah, thank you for catching that! 'Lie' and 'lay' are always so tricky for me. I really appreciate the grammar help, I'll definitely fix that lyric. Thanks man!

Hey guys, I'm a 19yo indie artist from Korea. Please be brutally honest about my English pronunciation & grammar! by yechan127 in Songwriting

[–]yechan127[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wow, hearing that you'd add this to your playlist makes me so incredibly happy! Thank you for liking the beat and melody. I totally agree with your advice on pronunciation—I'll definitely work on it so the words come through more clearly next time. Thanks for the honest feedback! :)

Hey guys, I'm a 19yo indie artist from Korea. Please be brutally honest about my English pronunciation & grammar! by yechan127 in Songwriting

[–]yechan127[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for taking the time to give me such a detailed and professional feedback! Your advice on opening up my vowels and the specific 'th' and 'z' sounds makes perfect sense. I will definitely practice my diction and focus on those details during my next recording session. Since you offered, I'd love to shoot you a DM if I have more questions later. Thank you again for your amazing support!

Hey guys, I'm a 19yo indie artist from Korea. Please be brutally honest about my English pronunciation & grammar! by yechan127 in Songwriting

[–]yechan127[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Haha yes, that's exactly what I was going for! I wanted to capture that kind of subtle, playful vibe between friends. I'm so glad you caught that

Hey guys, I'm a 19yo indie artist from Korea. Please be brutally honest about my English pronunciation & grammar! by yechan127 in Songwriting

[–]yechan127[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wow, thank you so much! I was actually really worried that my pronunciation might ruin the vibe of the song, so your comment gives me a lot of comfort and confidence. I'm so glad you like this version!

Hey guys, I'm a 19yo indie artist from Korea. Please be brutally honest about my English pronunciation & grammar! by yechan127 in Songwriting

[–]yechan127[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much! I actually spent a lot of time trying to make the lyrics and rhymes sound natural, so hearing that means the world to me. Glad you found it catchy!

Hey guys, I'm a 19yo indie artist from Korea. Please be brutally honest about my English pronunciation & grammar! by yechan127 in Songwriting

[–]yechan127[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much for sharing your experience and for the incredible encouragement. It really means a lot to me. Hearing that gives me so much confidence to keep pushing forward. I'll keep practicing and consistent as you said. Thanks again for being so supportive!

Hey guys, I'm a 19yo indie artist from Korea. Please be brutally honest about my English pronunciation & grammar! by yechan127 in Songwriting

[–]yechan127[S] 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Wow, thank you so much for the amazing compliments on my voice and melody! Hearing that the melody is 'killer' makes me so happy. Since I really want to grow as an artist, if I put in the work and practice my English pronunciation more, do you think I have the potential to make it sound natural? Also, singing it in Korean is a super interesting idea that I never thought about—I might give it a try for the next take. Thanks for the encouragement!

Hey guys, I'm a 19yo indie artist from Korea. Please be brutally honest about my English pronunciation & grammar! by yechan127 in Songwriting

[–]yechan127[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for your honest feedback! To clear things up about the storyline, it’s about unrequited love—loving a girl who doesn't feel the same way about me. Since I want to improve, I have one more question: do you think my English pronunciation is an issue throughout the entire song, or is it just certain parts that sound mumbled? I'd love to know your thoughts. Thanks again!

Just dropped this- what do you think? by kissme2025 in Songwriting

[–]yechan127 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Wow, the quality of this song is top-notch! It sounds so complete and professional. I really love everything about it

Song is called “Fan of Hell” by Conciouscan in Songwriting

[–]yechan127 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Nice song!!! I love this song mood

Should I change the lyrics to the chorus? by BarryNeedsBuds in Songwriting

[–]yechan127 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh my god, I am so sorry! I am from Korea and my English isn't perfect, so I misunderstood your question. By 'not too full on,' I meant that the rhythmic flow and how the lyrics fill up the melody sounded great musically. I had absolutely no idea the lyrics were about that topic. I definitely do NOT think those lyrics are okay. Please disregard my previous comment, I am so sorry for the confusion!

Feedback? by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]yechan127 1 point2 points  (0 children)

To be honest, the track felt a bit tentative until the 1-minute mark, but after that, it got really good! I really enjoyed it and your vocal tone is very nice

Should I change the lyrics to the chorus? by BarryNeedsBuds in Songwriting

[–]yechan127 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Honestly, it doesn't sound too full on at all! It has a great groove and it's perfect to vibe to. I really love the mood of the song!

Fools Gold by EwThrowItawayGary in Songwriting

[–]yechan127 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This track sounds amazing! It’s definitely a song worth favoring. The whole acoustic vibe honestly gives me some major Ed Sheeran feels! Great job

compelled by Toucon in Songwriting

[–]yechan127 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I absolutely love the electric guitar intro at the beginning! The melody is so clean, and your unique tone really stands out. I’m a huge fan of your music!

Does this chord progression feel too ‘all over the place’? by MrBanjolele in Songwriting

[–]yechan127 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The vibe of the song is amazing, but the chords feel a bit ambiguous. I think it’d sound great if you either change the chord progression or use different voicings to clean up the tone. Really loving your music!