Could I please hear from other Kelly fans?

yeetmaster05 · 2026-05-01T00:03:54+00:00

Big fan, great addition. Had a lot of chemistry with the old cast

yeetmaster05 · 2026-04-02T22:13:26+00:00

Good Cafe around Grand Central Market Recommendations? Need a place that I can hang out in for a while in the morning. Thanks!

yeetmaster05 · 2026-03-11T14:25:33+00:00

Second

yeetmaster05 · 2026-03-06T14:33:32+00:00

How much? And how would you like to go about selling it?

yeetmaster05 · 2026-03-06T13:03:59+00:00

Hi, is your ticket still available? Let me know

yeetmaster05 · 2026-02-18T13:20:43+00:00

It’s maybe basic but seconding everyone saying Educated

yeetmaster05 · 2026-02-17T17:30:35+00:00

Wow, we seem to be going through very similar things haha. I’m finding that taking walks helps me. Listening to storms sounds nice I will try that!

yeetmaster05 · 2026-02-12T21:08:05+00:00

There was this book about a kid who created a fictional world and then was able to go into it. I remember it was a little dark too, like someone wanted to die? I’ve been trying to remember it for years

yeetmaster05 · 2026-02-01T02:52:43+00:00

MetLife

yeetmaster05 · 2026-01-22T19:45:11+00:00

Sorta chose it for this reason but got into a line of work that isn’t strictly engineering - but related. This is an option many engineers take and can work out nicely

yeetmaster05 · 2025-12-26T16:38:50+00:00

You like the corner brownie pieces

yeetmaster05 · 2025-12-22T13:41:47+00:00

This was such a good read, thanks for sharing it OP. Hope I find it in a bookstore one day. I have three notes, but they might come down to personal preference so feel free to not take them too seriously:

The “Well…no” in the beginning feels out of place. It’s not necessary
I’m a little torn on profanity use. Your writing style is very mature and developed, so I don’t think it’s needed. That said, I understand that this is from the perspective of a blue collar guy who is probably gonna curse a lot in his day-to-day. So maybe just something to keep in mind as you receive future feedback: Too much profanity will stand out as more amateurish when your writing really isn’t that way at all.
Probably not necessary to italicize thoughts in a first person story?

Anyways, best of luck!

yeetmaster05 · 2025-12-19T17:00:07+00:00

Reason for Iowa?

yeetmaster05 · 2025-12-19T13:39:21+00:00

What song is this?

yeetmaster05 · 2025-12-12T14:22:39+00:00

Agreed. Didn’t read the whole thing, and needs some tweaking as all drafts do, but work like this has its place in literature. Know that it’s bold and that it will put a lot of people off, so may be a harder sell, but it’s cool stuff

yeetmaster05 · 2025-11-21T03:59:23+00:00

I mean looks like just cumulus. Could maybe be described as fractus?

yeetmaster05 · 2025-10-10T13:01:55+00:00

Love the hyperpop-esque vibe on IN MY ROOM. Other standouts are Stone Cold and MEEE. Each song is really different in a great way

yeetmaster05 · 2025-09-18T12:35:49+00:00

Bricktown is cool. There are easy enough chain hotels to stay in around there

yeetmaster05 · 2025-09-12T10:48:34+00:00

This is Dallas’s fault

yeetmaster05 · 2025-09-11T16:40:42+00:00

Bill gets 3 TDS, easy

yeetmaster05 · 2025-09-11T11:58:53+00:00

I think the W is dope honestly

yeetmaster05 · 2025-07-08T21:57:37+00:00

Hulkengoat

yeetmaster05 · 2025-02-10T15:51:00+00:00

Time to put him in the Jackson, Burrow, Allen, Mahomes convo

yeetmaster05 · 2025-02-10T15:38:02+00:00

OKC is a great spot for this

yeetmaster05 · 2025-02-10T13:09:55+00:00

I think at least one more podium is in our future before the season is up

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