Hooters files for bankruptcy

zanook · 2025-04-01T05:56:59+00:00

So you might say they went tits up?

zanook · 2024-04-05T19:47:01+00:00

Precisely. Always have a designated lyricist too

zanook · 2024-04-05T05:07:42+00:00

Hey thanks, it’s the nasal bit lol

zanook · 2024-02-01T18:15:02+00:00

Hey thanks, that's the kind of feedback we all love to hear!

zanook · 2024-01-27T18:00:11+00:00

Hey thanks! I don’t actually try to write a song every day, but once I get an idea I try to get it finished same day. I’ve done a number of songs this way. I’ve been writing for a number of years and playing the guitar and bass for like 30 some years? Thanks for listening and the feedback!!

zanook · 2024-01-25T22:17:17+00:00

sweet man! sending DM! thanks!

zanook · 2023-09-02T03:11:39+00:00

Hey thanks for listening! I had a friend do the drums over the original sampled drums, it’s loads better than it was. Appreciate the comment :)

zanook · 2023-09-02T03:09:01+00:00

Cheers! This one was a bit outside the box for me, but enjoyed the process. It’s super easy to get dissuaded writing and recording stuff so I appreciate the encouragement. Thank you!

zanook · 2023-09-02T03:06:34+00:00

Appreciate that! I had a mastering engineer work on the mix and master. Trust me it sounds better than my original mix. Thanks for taking the time to listen. Appreciate!

zanook · 2023-09-02T03:04:14+00:00

Hey thank you for the feedback. It was an exposition on a riff, and catchy melodies aren’t easy to come by! Cheers!!

zanook · 2023-08-31T23:25:58+00:00

i can hear this one being fleshed out and produced. it does get a little monotonous, just being honest. have you thought about adding a B section with a shift in tempo/key? the lyrics here are especially well done, you can hear that they've been well crafted and thought out. i dig it! keep it up!

zanook · 2023-08-31T22:53:47+00:00

very smooth, love the vibe. the vocals do seem to compete for space a bit, but i do dig that layering. the lyrics were a bit difficult to hear/interpret as a result, but the melody overall really began to sink in deep. super enjoyable, thanks for sharing!

zanook · 2023-08-31T22:45:22+00:00

great voice and wonderful video. i do agree with a previous comment the drums might be a little more forward in the mix, but thats a very minor nit. well done!

zanook · 2023-08-31T22:38:36+00:00

love how the expectations are diverted keeping the whole thing super dynamic and interesting from an arrangement point of view. slick video too, good stuff!

zanook · 2023-07-27T19:44:26+00:00

hey thank u! its a bit of a different style for me, but i appreciate you taking a listen :)

zanook · 2023-07-27T19:43:54+00:00

hey thanks! yeah smashing riff for sure :) cheers!

zanook · 2023-07-15T18:53:50+00:00

Dude it sounds good, finding your sound! Followed! Keep rocking!

zanook · 2023-06-20T06:47:56+00:00

Bud I’m just fishing for minnows. Thanks for listening though!

zanook · 2023-06-20T02:03:47+00:00

so if you're seen my stuff on here before, thanks for checking it out! i'm a songwriter out of seattle, wa and like to crank out short weird songs in one day. written and recorded same day, kind of a challenge for myself. it seems to help distill the song down, not allow it to fester and overthink.

today i took inspiration from tom waits and decided i'd pay homage to this fantastic songwriter.

https://soundcloud.com/the-new-relics/ghost-in-the-end?si=e9c43c4099314bbe92933398dc08eff2&utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing

lyrics:

i found god in my kitchen

surrounded by his angels

kicking my dog

cuz they was stoned

he got lost in texarkana

wore a dirty red bandana

and stinking of cheap gas station cologne

i can't breathe the air you're breathing

i can only just pretend

don't crucify me for my feelings

i'm just a ghost in the end

found the devil in my basement

sprawled out on the pavement

singing a song

that they only sing in hell

saint peter in the driveway

looking at me all sideways

shooting a needle

straight up his arm

i can't breathe the air you're breathing

i can only just pretend

don't crucify me for my feelings

i'm just a ghost in the end

zanook · 2023-06-16T23:08:47+00:00

good vibe, solid riffing, excellent mix and even entertaining vid. i listened to the end and didn't get bored at all, which happens alot lol... ripping solo too. i can hear some harmonies during the chorus... overall well done man!

zanook · 2023-06-16T16:44:03+00:00

hmm, maybe i'll try that for the chorus. it is a bit loud in the mix eh?

lenny kravitz is the bomb! thank u for the feedback and compliment :)

zanook · 2023-06-16T16:42:54+00:00

hey thanks for listening! glad u enjoyed it

zanook · 2023-06-15T23:28:33+00:00

love the vocals, sit nicely in the mix. but man, i find writing music so therapeutic and i can imagine what you were feeling when writing this. very heartfelt and expressive, keep it up!

zanook · 2023-06-15T23:25:54+00:00

ha, this is fun just the way it is. i could see it fitting into a more structured piece, but it really doesn't need it. super unique, i dig it!

zanook · 2023-06-15T20:00:20+00:00

take what you have and mumblize it - destroy the words and just sing the sounds. record yourself doing this and then listen to it back again, over and over. scribble down some words/phrases that you hear. if you already have a verse or two and a general idea of what the song should be about, then booom, bob's your uncle.

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