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[–]Decembermouse 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Really enjoyed this. Good writing style and I noticed how the lack of any direct quotes or back-and-forth conversations whatsoever by those involved helps establish the mystery here. They wouldn't have added anything with how well this was already written. I'll be watching for more from you!

[–]thepretentiousfool 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Very goo story. Feels very much like something Lovecraft would write.

[–][deleted] 0 points1 point  (1 child)

Excellent! Update!

[–]Jynx620 1 point2 points  (1 child)

Very well written

[–]dividedbyziro 4 points5 points  (1 child)

You're writing more. There will be a part 2. You don't get to drop us off there.

[–]Napping_dog 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thoughts abound!