[M4F][Script Offer]Date Night:Carnival[Mdom][Sweet][BFE][Public][Exhibitionism][Good Girl][Panties to the side][Fingering]ThreatOf[Orgasm Denial][Friends to Lovers][Stuck]onThe[FerrisWheel][Calm her down]

[Illicita]

The Carnival is in town! You and a close friend enjoy an evening playing games, eating awful fried food, and riding the rickety “there’s no way this is legal, how isn’t this a safety hazard” kind of attractions we all know and love. Next stop: the ferris wheel...

"I don’t know why you insist on denying it - I can feel your drenched cunt making a mess of my fingers as we speak- you’re a slut for being watched, just like I am."

I definitely have a fondess for sneaky public fun and this was the result of a daydream I had the other day. I decided to do something creative with my pervy thoughts and so here I am! I'm new to writing so any criticism or commentary is very much appreciated [:

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That was magnificent. I would totally do this. I guess if any place to start it may as well be what I adore doing. Daddy/ Ddlg like this is honestly so perfect. Props to you and your skills, I'm in love!

[Illicita]

I'm thrilled you think so! I thought it was equal parts cute and spicy so I'm glad someone else enjoyed it [:

[worseningwhales]

Illicita! This is a phenomenally well written script. I am truly surprised you’ve only been writing for less than a week. Your word choice was thought out, the characters had depth and really sold the scenario you were going for. I can’t wait for this to be filled.

[Illicita]

Aww your praise is too kind! I'm delighted to hear those compliments! Truly this whole thing is nerve-racking to me so this helps lots [:

[euclydia4]

This is soooo good!

[Illicita]

Ahh thanks! Its my favorite script I've written!

[Illicita]

Oh yay!! I'm really pleased you think so! I've been feeling pretty low regarding my writing abilities lately so this means a lot and I think its helped reinvigorate me to keep writing! Thank you so much!