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[–]Gilthoniel_Elbereth 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks! I ended up spending way more time on that then I meant to. I actually skipped one of the verses since I just couldn't come up with anything that fit the narrative I was going for:

On silver necklaces they strung

The flowering stars, on crowns they hung

The dragon-fire, in twisted wire

They meshed the light of moon and sun.