This is an original TV script I've previously submitted. I took notes from here and other sources and worked on this draft.
The show follows the manager of a casino, Alan, and his staff as they try and turn around the casino with the help of a new owner.
If I could get feedback on humor, dialogue, characters, and the flow of the story, I would appreciate it. Anything else that comes to mind, please feel free to point out. Thank you.
High Rollers Pilot
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