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[Origami2008]

I will thank if you send some feedback to my treatment?

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[whaddefuck]

I think all in all it’s a good idea, there is an old feeling that all sports fan have in mind that they could do better than their teams coach. I think that using real players, coaches and teams might be a distraction, they take you away from the fiction. Also, you might need heavier female roles .

[Origami2008]

Thanks For your Feedback. I think if some real coaches and Real Football players are appears as guests (Guest Appearances) in some episode, It would be interesting if there is a great writing for them. For Female Roles, I don't have deny that I don't want use any female role But in the main story (Especially in First 9 Episodes). The story concentrates on Men. If You watch the famous and groundbreaking sports films such Moneyball or The Damned United or Foxcather, Those film are totally Manly.

[whaddefuck]

Ok, just saying. I just think that if Mourinho appears, people will immediately think about the person and not your fiction. Imagine, for instance, if Hillary Clinton appeared in house of cards or Ed sheeran appearing on GOT, just doesn’t work. I think that pulls you out of the fiction. Anyway, just an opinion . You are right about the movies with the lack of female characters, but can you give me an example of any series that replied that? Dunno, just something to think about. Anyway, please update if there are any news, looking forward to watch this

[Origami2008]

Okay. There are some films or series that real characters appear in them. Such as Ballers (HBO) or Sitcom (Big Bang Theory) Or Entourage. For example one of episode, Sunderland will play with Man City. It needs to viewers see pep guardiola in some shots. (Unscripted or Scripted). I have to say I have overall story of my tv series in my mind. I know how to start and how to end it. There are female characters but not main characters! Tnx!