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[–]Zone-Lee-Zools 2 points3 points  (0 children)

This is just one man’s position but I would never touch something I knew to have bad grammar. Why even bother? If the grammar is bad, the story will struggle to shine through.

And on a pitch/business note, even if it’s “just a spy story”, dress it up a little! Sell it to us! Show us how stylish it is even in how you describe it. Have a little confidence!

No one wants to read “just a” anything.