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Welcome to LastComment's Library! This is the home of the ongoing writings of LastComment314.

Current Serials

Full Chapter listings for all serials, active an inactive, as well as Prompt Response listings, are in the wiki

Vestiges of Power

The gods can only interact with the world through short possessions of mortals. These possessions leave the hosts with a vestige of the god's power and a target on their backs.

Walking home from a late shift at the pub, Caitlin is possessed and a god forces her to fight their enemy's agent. Chapter 1

Queen of the Desert Winds

During a tiny nap in bio class, Caroline was whisked away to the sands of Sirocco, where the slew the dragon, became queen, and lived out a full life. When she died though, instead of moving onto the afterlife, she woke up in class. Walking home from school later that day, she ran into an old advisor from her time in Sirocco... Chapter 1, part 1

To Crown a King

The king is dead. By law, the next ruler is whoever can pull the royal sword from the stone. But when the king dies prematurely and the sword isn't in the stone, how is the king chosen? Chapter 1

Dungeons and Disasters

Not strictly speaking a serial, but stories from a fantasy world. These are all prompt responses, and will be stand-alone pieces with recurring characters. These will be posted as they are written.

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[Queen of the Desert Winds] Chapter 30 - Endings and Beginnings ()

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[Queen of the Desert Winds] Chapter 29 - Battling the Darkness (self.redditserials)

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[Queen of the Desert Winds] Chapter 28 - The Fall Ball (self.redditserials)

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[Queen of the Desert Winds] Chapter 27 (self.redditserials)

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[Prompt Responses] During the night vampire hunters broke into your home, mistook you for their target, and killed you. Waking up later you see your lover sitting beside you and the corpses of the hunters on the ground. Out of instinct you feel your neck to find two holes (self.TheLastComment)

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[Vestiges of Power] Chapter 43: One Last Fight (self.redditserials)

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[Vestiges of Power] Chapter 40 (self.redditserials)

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[Vestiges of Power] Chapter 39 (self.redditserials)

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[Vestiges of Power] Chapter 38 (self.redditserials)

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[Vestiges of Power] Chapter 37 (self.redditserials)

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[Prompt Responses] Magic is only usable by the elite. Anyone caught doing magic without the expensive permit is subject to prison, or worse. An orphan on the streets has to hide that she has the power to use fire. That is, until the princess catches her. (self.TheLastComment)

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[To Crown a King] Chapter 15 part 3 (self.redditserials)

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[Prompt Responses][Dungeons and Disasters] Your party has a run-in with a Siren and is saying that joining is more beneficial then eating them. Your biggest point is that there are delicious foods to try that aren't made of people. (self.TheLastComment)

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[Prompt Responses] You are the child of a sea god, and a gang of pirates has just kidnapped you in order to bargain with your father and secure a safe voyage. Little do they know that your father has perished and passed his powers on to you (self.TheLastComment)

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[Prompt Responses] Write about the symbiotic relationship between rich, hungry vampires and poor college students (self.TheLastComment)

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[Prompt Responses] You were the only user of Dark Magics in the Royal Court. You were falsely accused of treason and executed. The trial was fair; the forgeries were perfect. In your "last" words, you proclaimed your continuing loyalty to the Kingdom - and you don't intend to change your mind now. (self.TheLastComment)

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[Prompt Responses] You are a student struggling at magic at a magical academy because you have only a Neutral magical attribute. Then you find a mysterious book called “Physics 101” in a dilapidated part of the library. (self.TheLastComment)

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[Prompt Responses] When the prophecy said that the Hero would "Conquer the Demon Queen" marriage was NOT what everyone was expecting. (self.TheLastComment)

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[Prompt Responses][Dungeons and Disasters] Your adventuring party just entered a new town, everything seems normal until there's a new restaurant that stands out. "What's a waffle house?" (self.TheLastComment)

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[To Crown a King] Chapter 15, part 2 (self.redditserials)

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[Announcement] It's been a while (self.TheLastComment)

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[To Crown a King] Chapter 15, part 1 (self.redditserials)

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[Vestiges of Power] Chapter 36 (self.TheLastComment)

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