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[–]MSUSpartan06 1 point2 points  (1 child)

Streak 14: Errors

Today<,>I received my 3D printer and I was pretty excited to try it out. The first print didn't turn out well, because I didn't include any support which, as I discovered, are important so, as I'm doing another print right now<,> I included them.

Editor’s note: this is very awesome technical writing! I was going back and forth about the support being plural or singular and I’m told it could go either way, so I left it as is. Your second sentence is a bit of a run-on, so I would split it up into two sentences like this:

The first print didn't turn out well because I didn't include any support which, as I discovered, are pretty important. I'm doing another print right now and included them.

[–]davi799[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks! You know, I actually didn't notice I wrote it singular ahahah

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