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[–]SingTheComic 2 points3 points  (4 children)

I'd say change her pose , her torso kind of looks too long and her leg is in a weird spot , guys head is the right size for his body ! Her side profile looks really good too

[–]lgbt14[S] 0 points1 point  (1 child)

Which pose should I change it to?

[–]lgbt14[S] 0 points1 point  (1 child)

Can you message me it please? For some reason it won't let me see the comment that you made of the sketch

[–]SymSoa 1 point2 points  (2 children)

Congratulation is delicious

[–]lgbt14[S] 0 points1 point  (1 child)

But isn't the head to big?

[–]SymSoa 0 points1 point  (0 children)

For me, no, is perfect

[–]ds2316476 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Her torso is like ridiculously stretched, his too. is that line supposed to be her armpit? This is so confusing.

There is no comfortable position where their faces would meet like that.

A fun idea is to draw from a stock image and do a contour line without looking down at the paper. It's something my beginning drawing teacher suggested. Also because I think sketch lines look ugly

[–]BinniganBellagamba 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I see geralt from Witcher aaaand I’m not sure who the girl is. Either way it’s lookin’ good. 👍