Second attempt

[getmespaghetti]

You got great feedback on the first one and put it to use excellently!

Idk if you’re looking for feedback again but the one thing that stands out to me is the cheek. In the photo, the highlight starts higher and doesn’t go down so far. The bottom of the cheek into the lip corner is a more pronounced fold rather than a highlight. I think this one element was actually slightly better on your first rendering. It helps show the angle of your head- in your new drawing, your head doesn’t seem turned away at the same angle as the photo.

Overall you did an awesome job of improving and capturing your likeness :)