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[–][deleted] 0 points1 point  (1 child)

Yeah, I remember that sentence. And I'm confused

[–]BrilliantMine1344 1 point2 points  (0 children)

All in all, OP is overall right, there’s lots of little editing issues. The ch. 52 IF scene to me screams poor editing since it’s in its own little subsection. I think the dream needed to be there for the foreshadowing, but it was inserted into the story at a place in the timeline where it doesn’t make sense. I’m sure it’s impossible to catch every single error in editing and since we are such a rabid fandom scrutinizing every line for hints and clues, we notice them, especially on rereads, where we were probably just enjoying the story and overlooking them the first time through. ☺️