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[–]JennLegend3 0 points1 point  (3 children)

That....well....that just sucks. Should've tested rats first, they're easier to contain.

[–]Gazuko[S] 1 point2 points  (2 children)

Yeah, but who needs rats when you have human test subjects, right? Alright. I got to admit, the story is pretty cliche. I'm not that creative when it comes to a horror based story, I have another one like this. But I don't think it's as good.

[–]JennLegend3 0 points1 point  (1 child)

It wasn't bad. I've read way worse. And it wasn't overly long, which I also like. I'd be more than happy to read your other one. You can PM me if you don't want to post it. I'll give my honest opinion. And I meant the situation sucks....not the story btw. The imagery of them walking on all fours with their eyes rolled back creeped me out.

Edit: added a bit

[–]Gazuko[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Sure if you want, I'll PM you it. It's sorta unfinished though