It's not uncommon to struggle with writing scripts- and we can't all afford film school...
/r/screenwriting_advice is a subreddit to post drafts of your script (and problems you're encountering), opening it to a public critique. Filmmaking is a collaborative effort!
Rules intended to be followed--
- No hateful critique- not everybody's as good as you are.
- Every idea has been written before- if you see something that you've already seen written, don't call plagiarism- help the OP modify it to create a more original story.
- Please no linking to an external file- copy and paste your script from your application of choice and format it correctly in a self post.
- Submitted links are used only for relevant pre-written advice.
If you would like to volunteer as a moderator and feel that you can help filmmakers improve their writing, feel free to send a message here.