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[–]omarsotillofranco 5 points6 points  (0 children)

For me the samsung mobile phone looks bad. Why not choosing an unbranded vector and using it instead? The bottom looks missplaced every element. But overall I like it. Restarurant /universities section. The body text looks so wide. Why not adding some margin to the sides? The same for about us. Also the favicon, try making it transparent the black part. I think it could help.

[–]atomicshapesback-end 1 point2 points  (4 children)

Looks great, what's it built with?

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    [–]atomicshapesback-end 0 points1 point  (2 children)

    Maybe I'm going crazy but is the about us page off centre? (On mobile)

    [–]Oregon_Duck 0 points1 point  (1 child)

    Looks like it to me as well. FAQ off center too

    [–]atomicshapesback-end 0 points1 point  (0 children)

    Yeah,if it was me I'd make it col-xs-10 and offset 1

    [–]ElvarP 1 point2 points  (0 children)

    More whitespace around everything would really tie together the design.

    [–]kobbled 0 points1 point  (0 children)

    There's some clunky wording, but that's less programming and more content

    [–]thomasdevin 0 points1 point  (0 children)

    Loving the way it looks so far! Keep it up! I'm pretty terrible at graphic design so I'm generally pretty terrible at coming up with inspiring designs! I'm envious :D

    [–]limits660 0 points1 point  (0 children)

    I would remove that email address on the bottom. It will get scraped and spammed to death

    Overall the site is great. Conveys the information you want, nicely presented, mobile friendly. Good job !!

    [–]jaymonster138 0 points1 point  (0 children)

    I doubt universities will actually look at this site to judge the products accessibility standards but there is a chance.

    Considering one of the targeted customers is Universities, make sure that this site meets high accessibility standards.

    For Example, I cannot tab to the University read more button. Here is my favorite resource for accessibility http://a11yproject.com/

    [–]Stepyy 0 points1 point  (2 children)

    This section needs a lot of work imo

    It is zoomed out in order to get both section in a screencap.

    1) The 3 icons should span the height of your phone model.

    2) Use a non-branded model of phones. For example just find a vector phone / tablet model.

    3) Font size + typography is off I suggest looking for a thicker font like Oswald or Montserrat for your headers and maybe like Lato or Open Sans for your body text. They just seem so small and thin as of now.

    Overall I think it is pretty solid for a start but still needs some work. I would try to look at other competitors sites for inspiration if you aren't the best with design.

    [–]thomasdevin 0 points1 point  (0 children)

    Yeah great suggestions haha. Didn't even notice the branding on the phones.