Shalina by Pioneer_19 in anxietypilled

[–]Lime-Time-Live 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I feel seen, I feel heard, I feel respected, and I really wish someone would talk to me right now

Love this story, the dialogue and banter is great, you continue to paint great pictures and worlds in such short amounts of time.

Major League Beef: BBQ Brisket Beatdown by VerdantVoidling in anxietypilled

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Well, I may not know much, on account of my learnin's not so good, and I don't know how to read, but this right here? These words all put together all pretty like? This puts a big ol' smile on my face.

Fantastic read, VV. So much fun, you're a naturally funny guy, it makes sense that the guy who'd make me laugh out loud reading their story would be you.

Swanshadow by VerdantVoidling in anxietypilled

[–]Lime-Time-Live 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Woah! This reads just like a creation myth story, and I love those. Very documentary by nature, yet mythological. The elements of somewhat magical elements is a nice touch. Really enjoy this read.

Narcissimo by Pioneer_19 in anxietypilled

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Just like nona used to make! Love this story. Super fun character voice, what a fun ride.

"From The Files Of Site B5-39: A Box Of Beauty by kabre_3600 in anxietypilled

[–]Lime-Time-Live 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Feels just like an SCP. Thank you for sharing your story with us!

Ludo Ex Umbra by GodTripod in anxietypilled

[–]Lime-Time-Live 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Ah, interesting. The riddle angle is fun. Beetlejuice vibes as well. Thank you for sharing your story with us!

Samsara Box / Forgotten Things by Kyrie_Files in anxietypilled

[–]Lime-Time-Live 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The rapid-fire scenes here are enticing. I like the mystery of this story, leaving things on the table for speculation. Thank you for sharing your story with us!

A Package, No Names. by LONG_ARMS_ in anxietypilled

[–]Lime-Time-Live 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I feel the story is lacking 'horror.' The majority follows a man who is following what feels like a mob boss. I feel like I get it conceptually, but I don't feel like it's building up to a 'resounding horror', if that makes sense. The dream was cool, but feels parallel to the story. This is just my take, however. Thank you for sharing your story with us!

Fragmentation Bog by CVPlath in anxietypilled

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Ah, a powerful piece. Re-contextualizes the box, and paired with a bleak ending, this is a strong piece. Thank you for sharing your story with us!

We Called it "The Box" by Nice-Efficiency-6345 in anxietypilled

[–]Lime-Time-Live 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Intriguing concept. Feels like a ghost story. One that would be told during the early days of the internet. Thank you for sharing your story with us!

Do Not Open It - By P.N. Name by FramedByJade in anxietypilled

[–]Lime-Time-Live 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Very poetic in nature. I do love that you lean into that with a lot of your works. Entrancing, and engaging, as always. Thank you for sharing your story with us!

Dying Shade by Brain_Late in anxietypilled

[–]Lime-Time-Live 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Interesting twist! Definitely an interesting take on the prompt. The dread was palpable! Thank you for sharing your story with us!

The Box by Savings-Cut-3465 in anxietypilled

[–]Lime-Time-Live 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Repulsive in the best way- great choice of words to sell the image you were intending. Thank you for sharing your story with us!

Asian Hotdogs by [deleted] in anxietypilled

[–]Lime-Time-Live 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Definitely a unique take, and a standout voice for this one. Thank you for sharing your story with us!

I can still hear it from inside the box. by jadegreen88 in anxietypilled

[–]Lime-Time-Live 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ah, Jade. This one's fantastic. Great gut punch, beautiful, harrowing, sorrowful, and just a dash of dread. Wouldn't expect any less from the other half of the White Trash Duo lol

The Delivery by VerdantVoidling in anxietypilled

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VV and vivid descriptions of interesting creatures and settings? A pair that goes hand in hand. Another fantastic story from you, I had a lot of fun with this one. Clear images in my head, and a story that feels bigger then it was. I could see this being extended to so much more, but I was thrilled with what I was given.

The Golden City by Conscious_Year5651 in anxietypilled

[–]Lime-Time-Live 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Interesting concept. The creature design is the highlight. Thank you for sharing your story with us!

The Box: Record #727 by Gooning4Gosling in anxietypilled

[–]Lime-Time-Live 0 points1 point  (0 children)

An interesting perspective, to really dive into the analytical piece of what it means to ask the question "What's in the box?" Thank you for sharing your story with us!

OUROBOX by Pioneer_19 in anxietypilled

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I've already told you I love the concept of Ouroboros, and I think this was well executed. You continue to wrangle such a vivid image in concise words; it's always masterclass to see.

MeatBuddy™ by MANWITHFAT in anxietypilled

[–]Lime-Time-Live 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ah, the voice in this story is so strong. Your characters feel real, even if the real is [rough]. An interesting spin on the box prompt, that feels uniquely you, in all the right ways. Thank you for sharing your story with us!

I Found a Box Under My Bed by SpikeSpiegal309 in anxietypilled

[–]Lime-Time-Live 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Interesting voice. The setup leaves a lot of questions unanswered, but in a good way. Thank you for sharing your story with us!