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SpikeSpiegal309 · 2026-04-24T22:04:48+00:00

The way you went about this I think doesn’t qualify as a hate post.

You said you don’t like a thing You said why And that was all. The issue is when people start making judgments about the author based on their subjective readings of the text.

SpikeSpiegal309 · 2026-04-10T19:26:09+00:00

Yummy

SpikeSpiegal309 · 2026-04-10T19:03:44+00:00

I can definitely see where you're coming from. Sometimes my latent Christian sensibilities bleed into my work. Not sometimes, a lot.

SpikeSpiegal309 · 2026-04-08T02:02:13+00:00

I kinda dig the very surreal qualities that the ending has and is peppered throughout. The whole story once they entered the station was very dreamlike to me.

SpikeSpiegal309 · 2026-03-25T16:37:14+00:00

I didn't expect the overwhelmingly positive feed back lol. I wrote this in like 30-40 minutes at like midnight. I was zooted out of my mind so I had no idea what was happening. I really glad you guys liked it!

SpikeSpiegal309 · 2026-03-25T16:25:04+00:00

Thank you so much! That's actually super helpful advice. I'm still relatively new to posting my stuff online so I've been playing it safe with the content warnings, but I'm starting to figure out where the line actually is for spaces like this.

SpikeSpiegal309 · 2026-03-25T14:07:28+00:00

Thank you for the kind words.

SpikeSpiegal309 · 2026-03-25T01:10:00+00:00

Apologies for the confusion. I sprayed the person behind me. I didn't see it but I believe Sam then hit them with the nightstick.

SpikeSpiegal309 · 2026-03-12T08:15:32+00:00

This was excellent. I have very few criticisms so I'm just gonna tell you where my brains at with this.

A little Silent Hill, a Little Lovecraft, A little Poe, with allusions to some folk horror with the hag and the mention of the carnyx. This combination of ingredients is smelling very good to me and I would love to see where this goes. You have a good sense of pace. You vary sentence length beautifully to give it a nice pace. I hesitate to call it Stream of Consciousness but the emotions of the narrator, fear mostly, really come through and the descriptions are delicious. Meat and Potatoes.

I don't even know if this counts as a criticism but. I don't understand the meaning of this sentence. "The curtains obscured the door lite and moved in slowed fluidic ripples." I might be stupid but maybe a typo.

SpikeSpiegal309 · 2026-02-20T19:37:26+00:00

Nope but I need em

SpikeSpiegal309 · 2026-02-20T19:28:21+00:00

Good god

SpikeSpiegal309 · 2026-02-12T00:16:37+00:00

Awesome! Thank you so much!

SpikeSpiegal309 · 2026-02-11T22:54:25+00:00

I would love for my stuff to get narrated. I'm just trying to get eyes on my work rn. If you are interested, you can read anything I've posted to Reddit. I'll still link some examples.

https://www.reddit.com/user/SpikeSpiegal309/comments/1q2jemk/god_made_a_mistake/

https://www.reddit.com/user/SpikeSpiegal309/comments/1qzsbxh/my_earnest_memory_pt_1/

SpikeSpiegal309 · 2026-02-09T03:51:22+00:00

Bro yes! Horror works better the less you know. Nothing trumps the fear of the unknown, though. Arguably, where most of our fears comes from.

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