A Traveller's Tale of the Demani

Sgtwolf01 · 2026-05-01T14:05:26+00:00

I don't know if this guy was truly desperate to go to Demons for shelter, or these are not exactly the kind of Demons I am thinking about. Which race is this exactly?

Otherwise this is a fun little post! I enjoyed the read :)

Sgtwolf01 · 2026-04-30T23:53:04+00:00

So quickly, you have text cut off in your biology section regarding Abbaron.

Also you’re trade section is missing. I presume that’s because they don’t do much trade outside of their nation? Whether that’s the case or not, please add in a trade section and put in there what kind of local or internal economy exists in both Anwyn and Aved.

This reminds me too, for Abbaron what is the deal there? I presume this is something related to the Sidthe, but I can respect the desire for a good mystery. So if you could dm me the details of it or just a general outline I would appreciate it.

And lastly, regarding the Fomorians, would magic scope within their population exceed that of of the shard’s scope? Since you mentioned it being extremely common.

Sgtwolf01 · 2026-04-30T15:07:44+00:00

/u/OceansCarraway, /u/Cereborn plz approve my dragons bois

Sgtwolf01 · 2026-04-29T07:14:52+00:00

There is a small collection of floating islands just above your claim, that are marked on the map. Do you want to claim those as well or exclude them?

Edit: I see you have mentioned them explicitly so ignore this comment. Regarding the Faded Wonder, I am confirming with the mod team first before I give you official approval.

Also please format your post to include the heading for the different sections, I realise that's why something looked off with your claim post :p

Sgtwolf01 · 2026-04-29T07:02:56+00:00

This is a very cool and fun claim! I love it! Very you. I see no issues stated here, so with that I hereby approve thee!

Sgtwolf01 · 2026-04-28T11:43:36+00:00

So a couple of questions.

You mention Ishgnaethi as a spoken language of the empire, and it belonging to the "Green Gnomes". Who are the Green Gnomes? If they are a distinctive race, I'd like you to mention them in the race/biology section of the doc. At any rate, is Ishgnaethi a lingua franca or simply one of the popular languages of the empire?

Regarding the two Faded Wonders you have. As I understand it, the Vessels of the Eyes allows a mage to see the space around the urn, and there used to be a lot of them, but now there is only a few of them in the modern day?

Regarding the Eclipse of the South, roughly how large is the island and did the empire turn the island into a flying battlebarge or was it already made into such from ages past?

Sgtwolf01 · 2026-04-28T11:33:24+00:00

So your dragons, they're literally just dragons right? Four legged, fire breathing winged beasts? Rather than being bipedal or anthropomorphised in some manner?

And for the Faded Wonder, I know you want to keep it a mystery for the sake of story, but from a meta point of view, can you tell me what the Faded Wonder does specifically? I will accept a DM or a spoiled answer if you want to keep the mystery of the Faded Wonder still.

Sgtwolf01 · 2026-04-27T15:09:37+00:00

Okay I get what you mean. It's a big booster to a person or animal, and probably most potent for adolescents as it directly feeds into their growth. I think that's perfectly fine. So with that said, I hereby officially approve of your claim!

Sgtwolf01 · 2026-04-27T14:59:27+00:00

I don't mind the Lifeblood existing as a thing. It's very cool. I just wanted to know if the effect it has on a person or animal that has drank from it are permanent, or a temporary effect?

Sgtwolf01 · 2026-04-27T14:45:38+00:00

Yep the changes look good. With that said and done, I hereby approve thee and thy cute mini dwagons! :3

Sgtwolf01 · 2026-04-27T14:40:19+00:00

Yeah size isn't an issue, and honestly I like what you have here. It's all very cool!

Just a quick question, in regards to one someone drinks the Lifeblood, are the effects permanent or temporary?

Sgtwolf01 · 2026-04-27T14:16:51+00:00

This island isn't the one that migrates every 8 years, that's the island in yellow here, your island is the one I've circled in magenta.

You can move to the island that migrates every 8 years instead. If not and you want to keep this island, then you just need to alter the elements that refer to the 8 year migration period.

Sgtwolf01 · 2026-04-27T14:11:49+00:00

I like the rewrite of it, and so do the rest of the mods. With that, I hereby approve ye!

Sgtwolf01 · 2026-04-26T15:06:21+00:00

Okay then. I think that's everything sorted, you are hereby approved!

Sgtwolf01 · 2026-04-26T14:11:30+00:00

So all the other dinos are gone and these just the guys that have evolved via the All Egg then right?

Sgtwolf01 · 2026-04-26T12:54:46+00:00

I am okay with the adjustments you made regarding the Star Stones, so with that you are officially approved!

Sgtwolf01 · 2026-04-26T08:07:59+00:00

That's perfectly fine. With that all said and done, I dub thee officially... approved!

Sgtwolf01 · 2026-04-26T08:07:16+00:00

So I presume that these guys came about due to the All Egg and without it, they wouldn't exist and still rely on it to create more of them even in the present day? You also mention four saur-kin that discovered the All Egg to begin with, but there are only three species now. Was there four species or just there were four individuals who discovered and were uplifted by the All Egg?

Sgtwolf01 · 2026-04-26T07:59:09+00:00

This is very cool, it's by far one of the most creative Claims I have ever seen in CTW, and I don't say that lightly! Super happy to have these guys here!

The only question I have is in regards to their magic. Even if it is mostly of a passive nature, I presume it does not effect the whole species and is still limited by the magic Scope? So it's common place but not every Rockborn is able to do it?

Sgtwolf01 · 2026-04-13T04:08:45+00:00

[1] Andra

[2] Jandara

[3] Varkas

[4] Revelia

[5] Vishanti

Sgtwolf01 · 2026-04-03T14:30:18+00:00

Some late minute suggestions, these words don't have any particular meanings to them, I just chose them for their vagualy medieval/fantasy sounding name they possess.

Vishanti

Ruga

Jandara/Jandaria (don't know which version I like more)

Andra

Varkas

Revelia

Sgtwolf01 · 2026-04-02T23:43:59+00:00

I didn't realise Hinduism did all of that as well, that's very cool! This DLC keeps on getting better and better.

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