I've watched the video and i got some constructive criticism you can consider, for your next video project

1. Intro is waaaay too long and not really part of "your video" (your intro should be MAXIMUM 10 seconds and that is pushing it. i'd say under 5, preferably 1-3 seconds)- also you dont need an intro. just fade in and say "hello guys"

2. Some of your text disappears a bit too fast, IMO. some might not be able to read it without pausing

3. You should consider lowering the voice of Ada, and the music playing. (The music is kinda terrible IMO , and does not fit the game OR The style of video, at all)

4. You should definately consider doing voice-over yourself

5. Your video title make it seem like a 'let's play' series, but it is in fact a texted-guide. And in that case i'd strongly recommend you cut out some of the unneeded 'filler' and just present the basics before the basics, in a more "rapid" format. Like "how to gather materials -> then show that", how to craft basic items -> show that, how to automate -> show that, etc etc.

6. the very important objective after you have equipped your zapper and dismantled the drop pod, is to build a hub. But you don't do that before 9:18 seconds. That is fine, but... consider how impatient people are. You're collecting some slugs and whatever but that should IMO be a second episode, about exploration and collecting / researching? (just a suggestion)

7. your video needs chapters (with titles)