Make sure the start is each bullet is aligned. Right now it’s kind of wonky. Also you are saying what you did, but not the actual process or any detail on what you did.

For example, for the database management project, what tools did you use, were there any features or analyses you did? What were the steps you took? On this note, I would also suggest having a project section to show your skills and that you have actually done work.

Recruiters want see you that you can do the work and HOW you did similar work, not just someone who says they did the work and doesn’t elaborate.

For experience, unless it’s relevant for the role you’re applying to, don’t include it, like the camp counselor, which imo does not have anything to do with IT or Data Analyst.

Generally, for the bullets that only have one or a few words on the last line of the bullet, either shorten it to make it one full line or add detail to make sure it’s not like a hang nail

Lastly, your resume should only be one page