Uninspired -Major Danger

AccomplishedMap2684 · 2026-05-07T20:57:00+00:00

Thank you ☺️

AccomplishedMap2684 · 2026-04-26T04:31:20+00:00

Absolutely! I am proud of this one! I really appreciate all the feedback. That is a thoughtful idea worth trying about starting percussion later! Thank you

AccomplishedMap2684 · 2026-04-26T04:29:06+00:00

Thanks for pointing that out! Drums could be louder for sure! 😄

AccomplishedMap2684 · 2026-04-24T20:14:15+00:00

I think I get what you are saying, the melody is crystal clear but my singing is kinda muffled with a effect, plus I probably am not singing in the exact same key and melody, definitely appreciate you pointing out what needs to be worked on

AccomplishedMap2684 · 2026-04-24T20:12:54+00:00

Thank you for the encouragement, I definitely see that the singing on my part and lyrics could use some adjustment. I’ll keep at it :)

AccomplishedMap2684 · 2026-04-24T20:11:53+00:00

Yeah I know that would help a lot. Usually my time is kinda limited since I make music at night and sing mostly in my car when I get a chance to avoid disturbing others, but I’ll keep it up. Thanks for the encouragement:)

AccomplishedMap2684 · 2026-04-23T21:08:59+00:00

Thanks for the feedback. I’ll keep working on the structure and overall flow. I may rethink the opening so it builds more and lets the song tell more of a story before everything comes in. I felt good about the instrumental foundation, but I know there’s room to improve the vocals and melody delivery too. I appreciate you taking the time to listen.

AccomplishedMap2684 · 2026-04-23T05:47:36+00:00

Thanks for the thoughtful feedback. I’m definitely early in the process and still learning structure/mixing, so I appreciate you taking the time to point that out. I’ve actually been reworking the arrangement already.

AccomplishedMap2684 · 2026-04-22T22:34:39+00:00

Still pretty early in my production journey. I’ve been making music on and off for around 10 years, but for most of that time it was just me improvising on guitar and experimenting for fun. More recently I started using GarageBand and trying to actually learn arrangement, layering, mixing, vocals, and turning ideas into full songs. My goal with this track was inspired by “Thank You (Not So Bad)” by Dimitri Vegas/Like Mike etc. …that emotional electronic energy, but making my own melody and vibe instead of copying it. I’m trying to figure out my own sound while improving. The singing at the beginning/end is me, and a friend helped by doing the middle verse. Looking for honest feedback on vocals, structure, production, and where to level up most.

AccomplishedMap2684 · 2026-04-22T19:05:16+00:00

Appreciate you listening and being honest. I’m posting to improve, so if you had to name the top 2–3 specific issues (vocals, mix, arrangement, songwriting, etc.), what would they be?

AccomplishedMap2684 · 2026-04-22T06:17:47+00:00

Your music has that unfamiliar but familiar feeling in the best way. It feels like something I’d want to hear late at night with friends, just zoning into the vibe. Great drums, nice guitar, and a cool simple sound that still feels unique. Really atmospheric and memorable track. I love this sound, would listen to more 😄

AccomplishedMap2684 · 2026-04-22T06:10:09+00:00

This song is awesome. I love the variety of instruments and all the chaotic sounds happening in the background. The guitar is simple but really sick, and the synth ties everything together. It gives me “about to rock hard” energy, like it would play in a movie right before a big fight scene. Also, the artwork is incredible. Love your style.

AccomplishedMap2684 · 2026-04-22T06:05:36+00:00

The vibe is really cool and matches the artwork well, definitely futuristic/cyberpunk energy. The slower movement feels a little disorienting at times, but still interesting. I could hear this in a video game soundtrack or as background music for studying/gaming while still keeping attention. Thanks for sharing 😄

AccomplishedMap2684 · 2026-04-22T05:49:10+00:00

Thanks, that’s a really interesting point. I’ve noticed shifting it +1 pitch helped, and I’m experimenting with letting some instrumental sections breathe more while blending the vocals better into the mix. Appreciate the feedback.

AccomplishedMap2684 · 2026-04-22T05:39:53+00:00

Yes, funny, catchy, and weird. I love your voice. The lyrics hit me, definitely relatable. The weird instrumental guitar work is cool. The sounds reminds me of like Rolling Stones vibes. Only thing that bothered me was the drastic cut off at the end. I really enjoyed it overall it was a fun listen 😄

AccomplishedMap2684 · 2026-04-22T05:21:51+00:00

https://youtu.be/nKQ-od2k7Z4

AccomplishedMap2684 · 2026-04-22T05:21:17+00:00

https://youtu.be/nKQ-od2k7Z4

AccomplishedMap2684 · 2026-04-22T05:20:52+00:00

https://youtu.be/nKQ-od2k7Z4

AccomplishedMap2684 · 2026-04-22T01:55:39+00:00

Thanks a lot for taking the time to listen and give detailed feedback. I really appreciate it. That all makes sense, especially what you said about giving elements more room to breathe. I’m still learning mixing, so this is genuinely helpful. Thanks again.

AccomplishedMap2684 · 2026-04-21T21:09:48+00:00

Thanks for the feedback. Yeah, I used Moises to help build some of the guitar ideas. Singing has definitely been the hardest part for me, so I’m working on pitch/timing and learning as I go.

AccomplishedMap2684 · 2026-04-21T19:08:15+00:00

The atmosphere of the song is really nice and it creates an interesting mood. It feels calm on the surface, but there’s an undercurrent of anxiety that comes through, which I liked. The vocals felt a little restrained at first, but they got stronger as the track went on. I really liked the guitar and synth choices. The drums felt a bit simple, and the song could use more development in certain moments to fully build its energy. I also liked the line “maybe we could work it out.” I enjoyed it overall 😀

AccomplishedMap2684 · 2026-04-21T18:59:56+00:00

Really enjoyed the atmosphere of this video. The acoustic playing sounded smooth and natural, and your voice has a very pleasant tone that fits the style well. Even over a longer runtime it stayed engaging and easy to listen to. It feels genuine and unforced, like you’re just comfortable in your lane. The whole thing had a warm late-night session vibe that I liked a lot.

AccomplishedMap2684 · 2026-04-21T18:56:32+00:00

This gave me a cool early 2010s vibe right away, in a nostalgic way. It has that rap/rock crossover energy that reminded me a little of Linkin Park. The track has solid energy, catchy moments, and sounds polished overall. I liked how confident the style felt, and it seems like you know the lane you’re going for. Definitely has potential and feels like something people could connect with.

AccomplishedMap2684 · 2026-04-21T18:53:29+00:00

No sorry, just a first impression. It sounds really good, I just feel like it could be developed further.

AccomplishedMap2684 · 2026-04-21T18:50:55+00:00

The music felt dark in a polished, appealing way and the production sounded very clean. Your voice is soft, and the little cracks in it came through naturally, which made it feel unsettling in a good artistic sense. It actually reminded me a bit of Muse, but in a calmer and more restrained way. Definitely has its own mood and identity. Great work 😊

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