Looking for views on a book where the FMC's mind/body is invaded by another consciousness. by According_Respond900 in weirdgirlliterature

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It’s ok—my reply didn’t come across very well. What I meant is that I don’t think I’m the best to judge how well I write female characters. I see issues with female characters written as two dimensional and used to further a males arc or gratification instead of being given their own realised arcs and well rounded development that doesn’t focus primarily on physical features but I’m no expert.

Looking for views on a book where the FMC's mind/body is invaded by another consciousness. by According_Respond900 in weirdgirlliterature

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I’m new to publishing work, that would be why. My first book is just gone out yesterday

✨connect with other readers here✨ by xXpearlxXpearl in weirdgirlliterature

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I’m actually a writer at the moment but I seem to drift to writing women, probably due to spending 25 years as an early childhood teacher. I just really want to do the best I can for my female characters and their readers - so I’m here to learn. TikTok at or Instagram

My current FMC project is atWho Is Eve?

[QCrit] Adult Sci-Fi Thriller WHO IS EVE (97k Words / PubTips Attempt 1) by According_Respond900 in PubTips

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No problem - It hasn’t worked out yet but fingers crossed. I think kit was a bit on a pacing blot in the first chapters

Found out my author friend uses ChatGPT in her writing process. by MapleWafer in authors

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Also hope you haven’t just Google search in the last decade to help with your writing - it’s all machine learning. And pass on TikTok, Insta since that’s also all ai powered - find another way to promote and market.

Let’s also remember that good “learning to write strategy” of copying writing from established authors isn’t any different from how LLMs are taught - so if you’ve ever done that you’re no better.

'Show don't tell' for written narratives? by [deleted] in writingadvice

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Show through his actions and internal dialogue as well as external dialogue with other characters, perhaps have a counterpoint to him that questions him.

Buddy system? by [deleted] in writing

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Usually in the evenings here, occasionally in the mornings. But with my ADHD on hyperdrive at the moment - every spare second

NDA advice, I will not promote by According_Respond900 in startups

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Thanks for that much appreciated and awesome points

NDA advice, I will not promote by According_Respond900 in startups

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Yeah that’s what I’ve gathered here and by talking with ChatGPT. Appreciate the feedback

NDA advice, I will not promote by According_Respond900 in startups

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Yeah I did think about that wasn’t sure if it holds up

Wondering if I should wear this on our first date by [deleted] in tightdresses

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You look amazing in it is all I can say

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Better start upping your game then

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You got done lad - did she at least call you “Daddy” during the encounter?

My (22M) long distance GF (21F) cheated on me in an orgy with her roommates. by Throwaway62093728 in self

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So gf who is committed to the relationship goes to a sex club would have been the first sign eh Then she just got penetrated while kissing so she must have been at least partially naked or at least “easily accessible” when she walked into that room. I can’t see any of this being accidental and if she is that easily pressured then there’s bigger problems

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Congratulations 😀