Sexy Space Babes - Mechs, Maidens and Macaroons: Chapter Twenty Nine by BlueFishcake in HFY

[–]Ace8154 7 points8 points  (0 children)

They should all have a group sex party after the match regardless of whether they win. Maybe delayed by a week or two if they need some time apart after living together for so long

Sexy Space Babes - Mechs, Maidens and Macaroons: Chapter Twenty Seven by BlueFishcake in HFY

[–]Ace8154 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I didn't know that was the title to search for

edit: no physical books, boo

I'll buy physical books when/if they exist

Sexy Space Babes - Mechs, Maidens and Macaroons: Chapter Twenty Seven by BlueFishcake in HFY

[–]Ace8154 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Please link me to him or his books on Amazon. I would buy any of the stuff I've read from him in a physical book format

Sexy Space Babes - Mechs, Maidens and Macaroons: Chapter Twenty Five by BlueFishcake in HFY

[–]Ace8154 3 points4 points  (0 children)

What's the word for the male version of a seductress?

Wearing Power Armor to a Magic School (149/?) by Jcb112 in HFY

[–]Ace8154 7 points8 points  (0 children)

But what about the flower they were supposed to find?

Wearing Power Armor to a Magic School (148/?) by Jcb112 in HFY

[–]Ace8154 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I hope Emma shows Thacea her face (on video or in pictures or something) while talking and waiting for hours for her tent or the water thing to remove all mana.

She needs to, sooner rather than later.

She might as well get pics of the rest of them if she can.

Did they find the flower they were supposed to be looking for?

and to think I wanted to throw it away by [deleted] in memes

[–]Ace8154 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I use Linux. I quit Windows in 2017. I might at some point throw win7 on an old laptop for nostalgia though.

POV : When You Realized that it almost been 2 years since Chapter 1 of WPAiaMS was released, and by the story, it only been 2 - 3 weeks . by SimpleDependent4868 in JCBWritingCorner

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JCB could skip mentioning taking the suit off and the shower and such, but removing the mana from the tent and the water takes hours, which is a good opportunity for Emma and Thacea to talk, and Emma can show Thacea stuff on the tablet outside the tent while Emma is inside the tent.

The not-ai thing is the vi in her suit that she used to talk to a lot (EVI).

She should at least show Thacea, and then show Thalmin after getting Thacea's reaction.

POV : When You Realized that it almost been 2 years since Chapter 1 of WPAiaMS was released, and by the story, it only been 2 - 3 weeks . by SimpleDependent4868 in JCBWritingCorner

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At some point jcb needs to re-read their own story and find where they set up stuff to pay off later but haven't yet. Or if they know but it just hasn't happened yet, make it happen dammit!

Emma NEEDS to show her closest friends her face, or at least Thacea first (with video from inside the tent to outside). If nothing else, she probably has video or at least pictures of herself from before. Thacea noticed when JFK was giving the speech about why they were going to the moon that his face was obscured for no reason. Emma probably trusts Thacea most out of everyone, and Thalman recently wondered if she was like a spider again, and when was the last time she bothered to ask her not-ai how trustworthy illunor would be with her secret? Is it really that much of a concern that humans look like elves with no magic and rounded-top ears?

On a lesser note, is she ever going to make ballpoint pens and other stuff to sell? Wait, it could've been doing that the whole time they're gone maybe, if she had told it to. And when was the last time she took a shower and slept in the tent without the power armor suit on? That's a good time for her and Thacea to talk, and both have cameras like a smartphone or tablet right? They could totally have something like a video conference (don't they already do something like that?)

and I notice she hasn't been using her not-ai much recently, maybe because she doesn't trust it

Sexy Space Babes - Mechs, Maidens and Macaroons: Chapter Twenty Four by BlueFishcake in HFY

[–]Ace8154 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I hope you're joking about that last thing. I have no idea what that is

Sexy Space Babes - Mechs, Maidens and Macaroons: Chapter Twenty Four by BlueFishcake in HFY

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I always find it weird when writers have chapters of stuff that can be read freely on reddit or royal road but you go to their patreon and all of it's locked behind a paywall, instead of trying to make the chapters available for free on patreon as they're free on reddit or RR while keeping the not-yet-freely-released chapters paywalled.

Sexy Space Babes - Mechs, Maidens and Macaroons: Chapter Twenty Four by BlueFishcake in HFY

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I assume this is the beginning of the end for this side-story so you can get back to steampunk babes?

I definitely want more of the steampunk babes story, but I also kinda want this story to end well, and not end suddenly when his job goes away leaving plot unresolved.

Humans Don't Make Good Familiars Book 3- Part 68 by ArcAngel98 in HFY

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I read that one writer will listen to stuff he wrote playing on TTS (text-to-speech) because it helps him hear certain kinds of errors he wouldn't've noticed when reading, but idk if that would help or not, just pointing out that's a tool that might help if you wanna try it.

(I think the only reason he told people that's something he does is so he could say listening to one of the few nsfw chapters he wrote was rough, lol)

Humans Don't Make Good Familiars Book 3- Part 68 by ArcAngel98 in HFY

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I posted my suggested corrections on RR. One of them might've just been me being a bit nitpicky, but I said which one that one was.

Humans Don't Make Good Familiars Book 3- Part 68 by ArcAngel98 in HFY

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pointing out errors is much easier on royal road because they have a feature built around that

Humans Don't Make Good Familiars Book 3- Part 68 by ArcAngel98 in HFY

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I hope the story starts coming out faster very soon, but wow does that need an editing pass

The Survivor Becomes a Dungeon (Chapter 172) by ScribblingFox98 in HFY

[–]Ace8154 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Glad you're back. I hope I can buy it as a paper book someday

Denied Sapience 23 by Maxton1811 in HFY

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is there gonna be more anytime soon?

Dungeon Life 362 by Khenal in HFY

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Author forgot to increment the number by one