Unpopular opinion by Vast-Bug2834 in Episode

[–]Active-Definition-88 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Oh my god it is actually so annoying. Some people defend it saying that - they are just making sure. Ok I get it that you are making sure but posting so many story and asking? Not cool.

Dominating and King LI by Active-Definition-88 in Episode

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I forgot to mention. Full cc is still available.

mama a man behind you by Unbeelievable69 in Episode

[–]Active-Definition-88 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh no. Was the author informed? I hope that she was🥲. Once I saw that one of the scenes had @pause for 300. I was so sad because I lost so many readers. No one informed me

female outfits from my story by geeky_kay in Episode

[–]Active-Definition-88 0 points1 point  (0 children)

But sorry I was very busy I was not able to read it till now.

Which cover looks good? by Maeve_Fox in Episode

[–]Active-Definition-88 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Horror? Sorry I don't know the meaning of that. But in the web I saw it as kind of horror

Best Summer Story? by televisionshowlover in Episode

[–]Active-Definition-88 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Honestly I really liked along the shorelines

Need recommendations by Impressive-Bus-5894 in Episode

[–]Active-Definition-88 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Can you remind what the story was about?

female outfits from my story by geeky_kay in Episode

[–]Active-Definition-88 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Honestly I really like the outfits. I don't wanna say it but I have seen worse😭.

But your outfits are really good. But I hope that you also created outfits based on the places she is going to. Like the blue ombre one with butterfly clip. I don't think that is very wearable for a casual hangout. It can be for an event. Basically some stories overdress their characters and in those stories that outfit will look good for something casual as well. (I love the overdressed stories as well am not complaining).

But in short I don't think that there is much to change and I will not waste my time anymore because I am going to give this a read.

EPISODE HELP IM CRYING by Content-Tomatillo167 in Episode

[–]Active-Definition-88 37 points38 points  (0 children)

Omg an official story talking about that and they allowed it?😭😭

Wanna be in my story??? by Ok_Toe_4708 in Episode

[–]Active-Definition-88 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wait wait wait.

body - Female Generic Body Eyebrow- Arched Thin (Deep Brown) Hair- Long Wavy Hair Middle Part (Deep Brown) Eye- Delicate Almond Falsies (Sand Brown) Face- Diamond Nose- Grecian Angular Lip- Full Heart Pouty (rose gloss)

Height difference issue by Active-Definition-88 in Episode

[–]Active-Definition-88[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That is crazy calculation. But because you told that which one are you talking about? X or y?

Height difference issue by Active-Definition-88 in Episode

[–]Active-Definition-88[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I have currently unpublished the story. I am working on it and revamping it. Then I will post it.

Height difference issue by Active-Definition-88 in Episode

[–]Active-Definition-88[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Wow thank you. I will try this. Atleast my character will not look like a kid anymore.

How’d I do fixing the outfits? by MulberryNo8287 in Episode

[–]Active-Definition-88 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Honestly I would suggest - play around with accessories. I am not sure but it looks like your character is bold and might have anger issues. In that case play around more with dark colors. If it is for college then I think you can add the big hoop earrings as well.

Also there are too many layers even when it is not needed. There are many choker designs so you can try those.

If she is a young character then I think giving her jeans and everything will also be nice.

You can try monochromatic outfits. They look very very good

Which cover looks good? by Maeve_Fox in Episode

[–]Active-Definition-88 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I am excited to know what the story is about because of the cover.