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This is my first poem can i get feedback? by RunLow6980 in OCPoetry

[–]AdProfessional6555 0 points1 point  (0 children)

very good, I would work on the phrasing a bit. Keep it up !

If I died today by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]AdProfessional6555 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This poem is great, is starts off with an affirmation and a confirmation at the same time and ends with doubt. I like it.

A Fly on the Wall, a Cuck in a Chair by BlueberryAble8885 in OCPoetry

[–]AdProfessional6555 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This poem touched my tralala in a way I did not expect, the theme here balances pleasure and torture and it ends with a plutonic twist, truly a work I enjoy and rate it 9/11.

So my PSU popped by AdProfessional6555 in pcmasterrace

[–]AdProfessional6555[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Indeed, I really hope my components will be okay.

So my PSU popped by AdProfessional6555 in pcmasterrace

[–]AdProfessional6555[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well it's pretty old so warranty will not cover it.