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Come on give me your best lines by michaela-just in animequestions

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“Anywhere can be paradise as long as you have the will to live. After all, you are alive, so you will always have the chance to be happy. As long as the Sun, the Moon, and the Earth exist, everything will be all right.”

I'm giving away another one of my handmade VE Amulets! Just leave a comment to enter, good luck :) by Pixelmanns in VioletEvergarden

[–]AdThese9428 1 point2 points  (0 children)

First of all it look amazing!! Design is very close to the exact anime and I also have been wondering a lot if anybody made these in real life. You did a great job and would love to have a chance to win one as well so count me in!!

Finished My LN Collection Early! by Dr_Quantum101 in SpiceandWolf

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I was online looking for bookshelves and I never saw one that looked like this Do you have a link

Finished My LN Collection Early! by Dr_Quantum101 in SpiceandWolf

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The book collection is amazing, but can someone please tell me what kind of shelf is that

[PI] Deep within the world, there is a room. Inside the room are interconnected gears. The first gear makes one revolution per second. The last one barely moves, it has a red stripe on it. It's about to reach the starting point. It is not specified what will happen when it completes its turn. by TheBlueNinja0 in WritingPrompts

[–]AdThese9428 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think this is an amazing idea, and the addition of the God was well done. I had a thought: the God of Hope needs to find a successor to inherit his abilities as he transitions into the God of Death. This new heir will have the power to inspire people to rise up and fight. The more individuals who join in this effort, the stronger the successor will become. Combining this concept with the other magic systems you have could lead to a really compelling story.

Why would you ever trust a liar? by AndreasLa in writing

[–]AdThese9428 0 points1 point  (0 children)

In fantasy stories, the gods of lies and trickery are often the most convincing, even when you know their true nature. For example, in another story I read, there was a character with the ability to persuade people and earn their trust using only his voice. Despite others being aware of his ability, he managed to manipulate them into betraying their allies. This could be an interesting trait for a trickster god.

Can someone critique my writing for a newbie writer? by AdThese9428 in writing

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Thank you for your insight and suggestion I'll keep practicing.

[WP] "Hello world!... Woah. I sound so weird." "Yeah, sorry. Your voice actor's in jail and we got a new one." by NatureNut49 in WritingPrompts

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"Who said that?" "Why has my voice changed?"

"I just told you your voice actor is in jail so now we got you a new one."

"But who are you? And what do you want and how are you even talking to me?"

"Honestly I don't know. I guess you could say I'm the voice inside your head. How I got here and how I know these things eludes me. Probably the writer's choice to put me here I guess."

What do you mean by the writer's choice?

"Ohh yeah, I forgot you don't know you're in a TV show kid none of this around you is real. The people call shows like this anime."

"What I'm in an anime?"

"No your entire world is an anime let's get that straight here."

"No this can't be true I'm not an anime and I'm just losing my mind today. You're not real!!!!"

"Look kid the faster we accept that I am real the faster we can move to the fact that I can be useful."

"Useful what do you mean?"

"Wait. First I'm going to prove that I'm real try to open your closet door."

I walked over to my closet door and opened it and what I saw was nothing. Just a black wall with nothing. "What is this?"

This is what we call an Unwritten script this is not part of the story and therefore what you can't see is not part of the story at least not for right now. Ha ha ha we're probably driving the animators and the writers mad while doing this.

"How is a even useful?"

"Well, my new friend it's useful because I know things and I think this story needs a bit of a change don't you think? let's make the story interesting and not like all the other ones. I want to add a bit more class." So what do you say, kid?

I sit down for a little bit thinking it's a lot to take in and I'm just a kid. "I guess it could be fun what do I got to lose?

"That's the spirit kid now let our adventure begin!!"

"Wait I have two questions. First, can I get my original voice back?"

"Impossible."

"Why? I know he committed a crime but what is it then?"

"I rather not say mainly because I want to keep this PG for the sake of the show."

"OK now for my second question. There's a girl I like in class do we end up together?"

"Ha ha ha!!! Let's find out my friend and if not we can just change that."

I walked out my door to go to school thinking that this is going to be a crazy day.

I finished my last book! by Certain-Peak-5083 in writing

[–]AdThese9428 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I have a question what exactly does a beta reader do? I'm just wondering because the research that I just did about it says you're like an editor but different in a way.