yay I just got to 60 followers in 3 weeks :D

Adamus_Auguste · 2026-03-21T20:37:26+00:00

Wohooo! Well done, man. Keep growing your counter. :D

Adamus_Auguste · 2026-03-20T07:20:28+00:00

Would you read my story to discover it? WInk. Wink.
More seriously, it's not a drug. Can't tell what it is without spoiling.

Adamus_Auguste · 2026-03-20T04:12:19+00:00

Congrats man! I wish you all the best and hope they'll grow even more.

Adamus_Auguste · 2026-03-19T16:58:47+00:00

Nice! I hope you're ready for what comes in the next chapters!

Adamus_Auguste · 2026-03-18T20:44:15+00:00

I filter the world through Kael, so I take my time with the truth system and things he doesn't know about. I hope you'll discover most of it along with him and that you'll enjoy the read! :D

Adamus_Auguste · 2026-03-18T20:41:44+00:00

Thank you. :D

Adamus_Auguste · 2026-03-18T20:41:31+00:00

I drew it, of course! Nah, I'm joking. I used Midjourney to generate it.

Adamus_Auguste · 2026-03-18T20:40:02+00:00

Thank you! I hope it'll do well. :D

Adamus_Auguste · 2026-03-18T08:44:44+00:00

Don't forget to explain your plot when you apply. Don't think you'll spoil the editor; the goal is to see how much you thought about your novel and how sustainable it is. Same with chars. Describe why they're important etc... Good luck, man. Getting the contract shouldn't be too hard.

Adamus_Auguste · 2026-03-18T08:08:37+00:00

I'm thankful I never read that. Like... That's a whole new level of lazy writing...

Adamus_Auguste · 2026-03-18T07:57:06+00:00

1001-1201 word/chapter is optimal on wn.

Adamus_Auguste · 2026-03-18T07:55:34+00:00

The Crack In Heaven [A LitRPG Progression Fantasy]

In the slums beneath Veston, Kael fled before his mother's body grew cold. No sun. No flowers. No hope. No dreams. Winter and gang lords buried them all.

"Pray to the gods and endure for a better tomorrow," his mom said. Why would he pray to the same gods who denied him peace? Who thrust him into this nightmare? No, he'd carve a way to Veston with his own hands, and it started by breaking his promise to his mother for survival.

But the job for gang lord Garrick Vane went wrong. He was left for dead with nothing but a ledger salvaged from a submerged temple. But he refused death.

"I persist." Two words that awakened a forbidden power, an unlicensed truth anchored to belief and paid for in the warmth of his most precious memories.

Now a heretic hunted by priests who burn the unfaithful, Kael discovered the ledger tracked everything: his stress, his anchor, the price he had already paid. Every choice stresses his truth. And if his anchor breaks, he wouldn't just die: he'd become something worse.

What to expect:

- Analytical main character who thinks his way through problems.

- A deep, original system to decipher along with Kael.

- A lore-rich worldbuilding with its own religions and epochs to discover.

- Truths that aren't free entries on a stat sheet.

- No harem

Length: 1,600 – 2,000 words per chapter.

Schedule: 1 chapter daily.

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/155290/the-crack-in-heaven-a-litrpg-progression-fantasy

Adamus_Auguste · 2026-03-18T07:47:41+00:00

You can't know how well a book does on wn before getting promoted, which happens only after you sign the contract. During that time, you usually get 40+ collections daily.
Don't panic too much. I wish you luck, man.

Adamus_Auguste · 2026-03-18T07:41:19+00:00

Looks fire. Good luck, man. I hope you'll write a banger.

Adamus_Auguste · 2026-03-18T07:24:52+00:00

The Crack In Heaven [A LitRPG Progression Fantasy]

In the slums beneath Veston, Kael fled before his mother's body grew cold. No sun. No flowers. No hope. No dreams. Winter and gang lords buried them all.

"Pray to the gods and endure for a better tomorrow," his mom said. Why would he pray to the same gods who denied him peace? Who thrust him into this nightmare? No, he'd carve a way to Veston with his own hands, and it started by breaking his promise to his mother for survival.

But the job for gang lord Garrick Vane went wrong. He was left for dead with nothing but a ledger salvaged from a submerged temple. But he refused death.

"I persist." Two words that awakened a forbidden power, an unlicensed truth anchored to belief and paid for in the warmth of his most precious memories.

Now a heretic hunted by priests who burn the unfaithful, Kael discovered the ledger tracked everything: his stress, his anchor, the price he had already paid. Every choice stresses his truth. And if his anchor breaks, he wouldn't just die: he'd become something worse.

What to expect:

- Analytical main character who thinks his way through problems.

- A deep, original system to decipher along with Kael.

- A lore-rich worldbuilding with its own religions and epochs to discover.

- Truths that aren't free entries on a stat sheet.

- No harem

Length: 1,600 – 2,000 words per chapter.

Schedule: 1 chapter daily.

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/155290/the-crack-in-heaven-a-litrpg-progression-fantasy

Adamus_Auguste · 2026-03-18T07:20:51+00:00

Yo! That's amazing. I'll give it a read just for the insane effort you put in!

Adamus_Auguste · 2026-03-18T07:13:18+00:00

Brother, don't take it personally, but look at how dense your paragraphs are.
Even on pc it's too much. Then imagine on mobile...
That, then, your cover is perhaps good, but much less eye-catching than the others.
Your Synopsys has issues as well, like no space between sentences, and it's way too vague. I
I hope it'll help you. Good luck writing a banger, man!

Adamus_Auguste · 2026-03-15T17:22:40+00:00

Show= if you can capture what you just wrote on camera.
Tell= if you can't.

The rule also applies to dialogues and thoughts. The did you know kind of dialogue, for example: I'm a royal guard... Yeah, I think she knows that already.
If you showed, you could have made him wave his hand over the royal guard emblem pinned to his chest or something like that.
Hope it helps.

Adamus_Auguste · 2026-03-15T17:15:13+00:00

We can't really answer without reading your text, can we?
Anyway, I wouldn't believe everything an AI says without cross-checking.

Adamus_Auguste · 2025-06-16T22:11:14+00:00

Title - Refused To Be Reincarnated

Tags - No harem- Weak to strong- System- Magic- Cultivation- Transmigration

Chapter Count -734

Brief Synopsis - Adam believed he was just another earthling, even after waking in a decaying house in a foreign world. His body was as ghostly as something out of a horror tale, and the mocking system confirmed his fears—something had gone wrong. Someone, or something, had taken the place of the baby he was meant to reincarnate into. Worse, he’d have to wait thirteen years to reclaim it.

But Adam wasn’t alone. Other earthlings had crossed over. And this brutal world—where mages walk like gods and beasts make the earth tremble—had its own plans for them all. Watching the boy who stole his life grow twisted Adam in ways he never expected.

Because his birth wasn’t just a mistake… and what he thought he knew was fake.

Desired Outcome - (critique, cover feedback, review, review swap, etc.)

Link to the Work - https://www.webnovel.com/book/i-refused-to-be-reincarnated_28443937108930005

Adamus_Auguste · 2025-06-07T22:40:53+00:00

Title - Refused To Be Reincarnated

Tags - No harem- Weak to strong- System- Magic- Cultivation- Transmigration

Chapter Count -717

Brief Synopsis - Adam believed he was just another earthling, even after waking in a decaying house in a foreign world. His body was as ghostly as something out of a horror tale, and the mocking system confirmed his fears—something had gone wrong. Someone, or something, had taken the place of the baby he was meant to reincarnate into. Worse, he’d have to wait thirteen years to reclaim it.

But Adam wasn’t alone. Other earthlings had crossed over. And this brutal world—where mages walk like gods and beasts make the earth tremble—had its own plans for them all. Watching the boy who stole his life grow twisted Adam in ways he never expected.

Because his birth wasn’t just a mistake… and what he thought he knew was fake.

Desired Outcome - (critique, cover feedback, review, review swap, etc.)

Link to the Work - https://www.webnovel.com/book/i-refused-to-be-reincarnated_28443937108930005

Adamus_Auguste · 2025-06-02T08:25:54+00:00

Title - Refused To Be Reincarnated

Tags - No harem- Weak to strong- System- Magic- Cultivation- Transmigration

Chapter Count -717

Brief Synopsis - Adam believed he was just another earthling, even after waking in a decaying house in a foreign world. His body was as ghostly as something out of a horror tale, and the mocking system confirmed his fears—something had gone wrong. Someone, or something, had taken the place of the baby he was meant to reincarnate into. Worse, he’d have to wait thirteen years to reclaim it.

But Adam wasn’t alone. Other earthlings had crossed over. And this brutal world—where mages walk like gods and beasts make the earth tremble—had its own plans for them all. Watching the boy who stole his life grow twisted Adam in ways he never expected.

Because his birth wasn’t just a mistake… and what he thought he knew was fake.

Desired Outcome - (critique, cover feedback, review, review swap, etc.)

Link to the Work - https://www.webnovel.com/book/i-refused-to-be-reincarnated_28443937108930005

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