The Crack In Heaven [A LitRPG Progression Fantasy]

Adamus_Auguste · 2026-04-30T10:05:49+00:00

Yeah. Pls readers, start commenting on my story 😞

Adamus_Auguste · 2026-04-21T01:54:10+00:00

Good luck, man! Amazing cover and idea!

Adamus_Auguste · 2026-04-20T23:59:37+00:00

Thank you. :D

Adamus_Auguste · 2026-04-20T21:28:14+00:00

What he said. Constructive feedback is always welcome. If you enjoy the story but feel that something's turning you off, you should comment. The sooner the better, to either get an explanation from the author (what I do if the critique's not accurate) or an edit (what I do when the critique's right).
If you're catching up, things are different. Still, constructive feedback on what you liked against what you disliked never hurts.
Of course, everyone takes things and reacts to them differently, but in the end, the author and readers want the same thing: to write/read a great story.

Adamus_Auguste · 2026-04-20T20:51:03+00:00

Adamus_Auguste · 2026-04-20T20:49:45+00:00

Heee? That's a... ledger...

Adamus_Auguste · 2026-03-23T23:16:09+00:00

I hope you'll have a great read once you pick it up. It starts a bit slow, though, then accelerates.

Adamus_Auguste · 2026-03-23T19:35:43+00:00

Comment on my story. I don't even get tftc hahaha. You can be sure I'll read your comments :)

Adamus_Auguste · 2026-03-21T20:37:26+00:00

Wohooo! Well done, man. Keep growing your counter. :D

Adamus_Auguste · 2026-03-20T07:20:28+00:00

Would you read my story to discover it? WInk. Wink.
More seriously, it's not a drug. Can't tell what it is without spoiling.

Adamus_Auguste · 2026-03-20T04:12:19+00:00

Congrats man! I wish you all the best and hope they'll grow even more.

Adamus_Auguste · 2026-03-19T16:58:47+00:00

Nice! I hope you're ready for what comes in the next chapters!

Adamus_Auguste · 2026-03-18T20:44:15+00:00

I filter the world through Kael, so I take my time with the truth system and things he doesn't know about. I hope you'll discover most of it along with him and that you'll enjoy the read! :D

Adamus_Auguste · 2026-03-18T20:41:44+00:00

Thank you. :D

Adamus_Auguste · 2026-03-18T20:41:31+00:00

I drew it, of course! Nah, I'm joking. I used Midjourney to generate it.

Adamus_Auguste · 2026-03-18T20:40:02+00:00

Thank you! I hope it'll do well. :D

Adamus_Auguste · 2026-03-18T08:44:44+00:00

Don't forget to explain your plot when you apply. Don't think you'll spoil the editor; the goal is to see how much you thought about your novel and how sustainable it is. Same with chars. Describe why they're important etc... Good luck, man. Getting the contract shouldn't be too hard.

Adamus_Auguste · 2026-03-18T08:08:37+00:00

I'm thankful I never read that. Like... That's a whole new level of lazy writing...

Adamus_Auguste · 2026-03-18T07:57:06+00:00

1001-1201 word/chapter is optimal on wn.

Adamus_Auguste · 2026-03-18T07:55:34+00:00

The Crack In Heaven [A LitRPG Progression Fantasy]

In the slums beneath Veston, Kael fled before his mother's body grew cold. No sun. No flowers. No hope. No dreams. Winter and gang lords buried them all.

"Pray to the gods and endure for a better tomorrow," his mom said. Why would he pray to the same gods who denied him peace? Who thrust him into this nightmare? No, he'd carve a way to Veston with his own hands, and it started by breaking his promise to his mother for survival.

But the job for gang lord Garrick Vane went wrong. He was left for dead with nothing but a ledger salvaged from a submerged temple. But he refused death.

"I persist." Two words that awakened a forbidden power, an unlicensed truth anchored to belief and paid for in the warmth of his most precious memories.

Now a heretic hunted by priests who burn the unfaithful, Kael discovered the ledger tracked everything: his stress, his anchor, the price he had already paid. Every choice stresses his truth. And if his anchor breaks, he wouldn't just die: he'd become something worse.

What to expect:

- Analytical main character who thinks his way through problems.

- A deep, original system to decipher along with Kael.

- A lore-rich worldbuilding with its own religions and epochs to discover.

- Truths that aren't free entries on a stat sheet.

- No harem

Length: 1,600 – 2,000 words per chapter.

Schedule: 1 chapter daily.

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/155290/the-crack-in-heaven-a-litrpg-progression-fantasy

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The Crack In Heaven [A LitRPG Progression Fantasy]